25. Writing Copy and Copywriters (Look Back...)

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In the Copy department there were four people doing the writing chores. Three of them were full time while the fourth one was a temp who was waiting for the results of the bar exams. I wasn’t sure if Ronnie Zamora was writing ad copy or PR articles for the Davids. Ronnie was a very bright fellow who eventually topped the bar exams, a feat that he aspired for to equal the track record of an older brother. He went on to a successful practice and later ended up in politics. One copywriter, Jorge Arago, was much too offbeat and literary for comfort. His writing style did not have any use for punctuation marks. His reason for this was he did not want to impede the fluidity of his expression by extraneous technicalities of grammar. I thought that it was carrying “stream of consciousness” to another level…to an extreme. The two others, Gary Flores whose brother, Rico, was also in advertising and Cynthia Reyes, the daughter of the then Press Secretary, were good writers in English but their lifestyles and backgrounds were from safe havens and comfortable middle class cloistered habitats.  

Copy writing is a unique trade. F. Scott Fitzgerald, Maugham, Thomas Mann, Faulkner great writers that they were will never be able to write effective copy to the mass consumers. The successful copywriters have lifestyles that are attuned to the classes of people that they write their appeals to. They would be the best judges of what their audience would like to see, like to hear and know what symbols would be meaningful to this audience. Being able to write stylishly, elegantly and grammatically is not enough. Copy and visuals are inextricably intertwined…they combine with sound, symbol and situation to create a compelling piece of advertisement. In the thinking of the sixties, I was hired because I had a degree in English literature and was looked at as a potential copywriter. I wrote reasonable ad copy but they were not close to the works of the truly great copywriters like Minyong Ordonez, Ben Kanapi, Tony Mercado or Greg Garcia who were spawned during that era. These copy greats had an uncanny feel and an acute sense of consumers’ likes, dislikes, aspirations and angst and was able to establish an easy and unthreatening rapport with their audiences that made them respond to advertising pleas and propositions. These copywriters even then already knew in their guts what are being espoused now in communications. The advertising world has moved on from that time and had introduced a lot of enhancements into the practice. Those tasked to create advertising are now required to have an in depth understanding of the day-to-day existence of their audience. Living the life of consumers is urged through immersions both by marketing and advertising people to help them know the nuances in the life of the ordinary consumer. Lifestyle and personality rather than academic background would be given weight in choosing recruits for creative work.  

Thanks to the demands and cajoling of some multinational companies a bit of science has crept into advertising. Advertising has become accountable to set objectives as laid out in the marketing plan. These were evaluated and looked at against standards earlier set. You cannot manage what you cannot measure was the buzzword. Research became an integral part of the marketing effort. Clients were demanding proposition testing, copy testing and ad material testing before campaigns were launched. This was not only in creative but also in media planning as well. With research, definitions of target markets and audiences were sharper and with the use of psychometrics, went beyond lifeless demographic descriptions. While advertising still sought the big creative idea, the marketing brief demanded that it satisfy commercial ends.  

One of the senior executives at Great Wall was Rudy Martel whose wife Aleta is the sister of the Imelda Marcos. He was vice president for market research but soon left presumably to attend to their business holdings that were resuscitated with the advent of great opportunities. Rudy’s forte was quantitative and while advertising made good use statistics on demographic data for macro views, research or marketing research was coming of age and the demand for information went beyond quantitative data. Marketing research was probing into the customers’ psyche, his hidden desires and aspirations, the symbols that were meaningful to him or her and what triggers their behavior. Qualitative research came of age and spawned the invention of new techniques. It was exciting times in market research. New elicitation techniques were springing out like mushrooms which claim to bring out all that the adman needs to know about the innermost secrets of consumers, from the apparent to the unconscious.There were very good ones but there were some that were weird and esoteric peddled by glib and opportunistic charlatans from the west.  

Ed Roa former CEO of ACNielsen, Phils.

The best read today. Love it

The best read today. Love it man!

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Thanks for the compliment.

Thanks for the compliment.

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Lots of good points here. Good reminder. :)

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His writing style did not have any use for punctuation marks. His reason for this was he did not want to impede the fluidity of his expression by extraneous technicalities of grammar.

I'm guilty of that ...

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They would be the best judges of what their audience would like to see, like to hear and know what symbols would be meaningful to this audience. Being able to write stylishly, elegantly and grammatically is not enough. Copy and visuals are inextricably intertwined…they combine with sound, symbol and situation to create a compelling piece of advertisement.

It's true ... it's hard trying to combine all aspects of writing together to create something that will appeal to your audience. Same rule applies to illustrations and animation: being able to draw well is not enough. You must place yourself into your character so that the people can find something in them that they may relate to. It's rather stressful.

 

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Lifestyle and personality rather than academic background would be given weight in choosing recruits for creative work.

Somehow, I find that hard to believe. 

 

 "... my people are destroyed from lack of knowledge"- Hosea 4:6

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Quote: Lifestyle and

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Lifestyle and personality rather than academic background would be given weight in choosing recruits for creative work.

 

Somehow, I find that hard to believe. 

 

From experience I know it's true. Some of the better copywriters are graduates of the school of hard knocks. Somehow they are more sensitive to others, more in tune with the common tao and uses language that are from the grass roots.

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I am often enthralled by

I am often enthralled by your use of expression, Sir. It is either that or I am truly a mere fledgling. Kindly explain what you meant by, "hard knocks" and "grass roots". 

 

 

 

 "... my people are destroyed from lack of knowledge"- Hosea 4:6

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 The phrase "school of hard

 The phrase "school of hard knocks" refers to actual difficult experiences in life which provides lessons indelibly carved in a person.

"Grass roots" refers to the level at which the common people are at.

These expressions are commonly used and maybe considered as cliches.

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Ha ha ha! Not to me! ^^;

Thank you, Sir!

 

 

 

 "... my people are destroyed from lack of knowledge"- Hosea 4:6