A Poem for ANGELO
Submitted by augusta linnea ... on May 24, 2007 - 9:55pm.
English | Literary Work | Poetry
I NEVER KNEW THAT THIS MOUNTAIN HAS A HILL;
MY ILLUSSIONS PUSHED ME TO GO DEEPER;
AND JUST WHEN I WAS AGAIN ABOUT TO BE FASCINATED BY THE FALLING OF AN ANGEL;
AND HOW AFRAID I AM TO DISCOVER ICE;
I REALIZED HOW NAKED TRUTH IS.
I REALIZED THAT THOSE EYES WERE REALLY NOT MEANT FOR ME.
I REALIZED A SMILE MAY MEAN A MILLION OF REASONS,
BUT WILL SURELY THRILL SOMEONE'S NERVES.
AND
LIONS MAY NOT ALWAYS BE THAT STRONG;
THE SUN WILL NOT ALWAYS BE THE CENTER;
AND
EVEN THIS
ZION
IS A GODDESS.
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Please do be aware...
Please do be aware that fonts are also part of poetry. Capitalizing and typing your poem in bold letters just so people can pay attention to it would only envision you as an amateur. And you won't want that even if you are one. Your poem, as I understand it, has a "deep" message but you don't need to tell us that by screaming in bold capital letters. Nice try though.