Burol

ed_roa's picture
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Funeral wakes in our barrio
Are simple but picturesque

Amidst boiling cauldrons of
Rice porridge with strips of tripes

A gathering of mourners intone their grief
While downing jugs of native grog

The sakla master shuffles the deck
Cards bearing luck not auguring death

Children past bedtime hours scaring
Each other while hiding under the casket

Wilted floral wreaths line up the walls
Like sentinels with nauseous breaths

The honored one somber in slumber
Indifferent to the homage paid him

The widow worries about the collection
Fingers the knotted hankie bulging with coins

Will there be enough to pay in the morrow
The brass band engaged to liven the sorrow?

Oh, but her eldest will arrive from LA tonight
Bringing US aid, then there's nothing to fear

Picture yourself behind the coffin's misted glass
A life well led but ended with trifling ceremony

Funeral wakes in the barrio will always be the same
As if I care, but I wish they can do better on my turn.


Patrickman's picture

another gem!

very realistic indeed! i'm especially annoyed with the manunugal mourners. i don't want their kind on my burol. but i guess i wouldn't know, darn...

 

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anakngfaraon's picture

the manunugal mourners annoy you,

 

...but they are somehow part of the Pinoy Burol Culture.  Also, some proceeds go the family of the deceased.

 

I don't think you can have sugal if the wake is in a church, though.

 

 

 

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Dap-ay Sapata's picture

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 eto yung tipikal na set-up pag may namatayan.

pero ako, parang nais ko yung mailibing sa tagaytay ng kabunbukan. yung maglalamay sa akin ay ang mga ligaw na damo, ligaw na hayop, mga punong kahoy na di ko alam ang mga pangalan. at yung hamog siyempre. 

ngapala, tipikal na pangyayari yung tula, kaya madaling maunawaan.

 

 

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anakngfaraon's picture

Oh, but her eldest will

Oh, but her eldest will arrive from LA tonight
Bringing US aid, then there's nothing to fear
 

 

This part reminds me of my neighbor in Manila who passed away a few weeks ago.  Her daughter arrived from the US to see her for the last time and to help in the expenses, which, I think, is a little too late.  From what I've heard, the daughter never sent her any money to help buy medicines.     

 

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sir ed!!! another

sir ed!!! another masterpiece. 

 

  

"hinahangin ang talulot na malaya, mula sa bulaklak na sinta hanggang sa matabang lupa.. siya ay ligaya, musa ng pagkadakila.."

ed_roa's picture

 Maraming salamat sa inyong

 Maraming salamat sa inyong lahat sa pagbasa at sa mga magandang komentaryo. Simple lang ang tulang ito na naglalarawan sa kustombreng Pinoy sa burol ng mahal na yumao.

ang gusto ko sa tulang ito

ang gusto ko sa tulang ito ay para kaung pintor sa pagkakalarawan niyo ng ating tipikal na burol...

kuhang kuha niyo ang natural na senaryo....

 

kung kau nga ay pintor ay parang istilo ni amorsolo ang ginamit niyo....... 

 

"hinahangin ang talulot na malaya, mula sa bulaklak na sinta hanggang sa matabang lupa.. siya ay ligaya, musa ng pagkadakila.."