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Submitted by ed_roa on July 2, 2009 - 10:03pm. |
Today I conspired with my heart
To erase the memories, the thoughts
Of the thrill that quivered my toes
The benign warmth that filled my breast
At the sound of her distinct footfalls
And the electric aura of her presence
That sent my heart and I in panic

No more of these, dear heart
My mind will not be addled
And my knees will not buckle
But heart, promise me to keep your cool
As for me, my instincts are not to be trusted


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wow

Submitted by Patrickman on July 3, 2009 - 5:48am.

you did it again, sir ed!

 

i wish i could have written this poem myself...  but i'm not too good with "big" words, so... yeah, i'll write a poem like this one of these days. :D

 

I'd love to turn you on...

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Just write from the heart

Submitted by ed_roa on July 3, 2009 - 7:14am.

Just write from the heart and the words will come easy.

Thank you for taking time to read and comment.

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i may not have a heart,

Submitted by Patrickman on July 3, 2009 - 10:24am.

i may not have a heart, then, haha... one of these days, i'll go back into writing poetry. thanks. 

 

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beautiful indeed!Sir ED i

Submitted by aireen on July 3, 2009 - 2:36pm.

beautiful indeed!Sir ED Laughing

i love it!!! Wink

 

cheers! Smile

 

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Thanks Aireen, I'm glad you

Submitted by ed_roa on July 3, 2009 - 6:11pm.

Thanks Aireen, I'm glad you liked it.

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"drop jaw"

Submitted by talulot on July 7, 2009 - 12:03am.

"drop jaw" again....

 

sometimes younger men lack this  eloquence.....

wish i was born back then.......

 

thanks for the poem sir ed!

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