Game Changer

Luca's picture

the feel of your thighs on my finger tips
and the smell of rain on your hair
the weight of your head resting on my lap
the breath on your hip with my touch.

You're a game changer
you got me caught up in your game
you're a game changer
and i'll never be the same.

I saw your face when i slept last night
and again when i awake
i should have made a move when you said i could
but i was so afraid you won't feel the same

see, you're a game changer and i don't know your game
cause i don't wanna be a player for you

woman
you're driving me insane. 


d-younker's picture

good construction of the

good construction of the poem and good selection of words.

love it luca! :) 

Luca's picture

jean!

ABA SUMAMA KA SA APRIL 16...

 

Kung ano man yung narinig mo, hindi "I love you" yun! Assumera!

d-younker's picture

sure. san ba? at ano meron?

sure. san ba? at ano meron? =D

text me. send ko sayo number ko.

d-younker's picture

...

ay, baccalaureate at graduation ko the day after. :(

akala ko 16 lang eh. 

shaimariel's picture

Song

I feel like it's more of a song. I can hear the tune :D

 

Sa likod ng magandang himig, ay mga titik na nagngangalit

Luca's picture

shai

maraming salamat sa pag basa. Di ko sinasadya yan pero parang naging kanta nga siya. Konting ayos pa sa sukat siguro

Kung ano man yung narinig mo, hindi "I love you" yun! Assumera!

jaysikat's picture

Galing

 Maganda ang pagkakagawa mo.. damihan mo pa ang pagsulat.. para matutu kami mula sa inyo..

sulat lng ng sulat 

 

Ang mundo ay  isang malaking entablado.. 

 

Luca's picture

thank you jay! Kung ano man

thank you jay!

Kung ano man yung narinig mo, hindi "I love you" yun! Assumera!

emopencil's picture

ganda^^

Ako rin, habang binabasa ko parang napapakanta rin ako, hehehe.. Na-feel ko 'yung poem ;) I love it...

jonsdmur's picture

  Wala kang kupas ah!

 

Wala kang kupas ah! Galing naman nito.... Cool

alcor eldioan's picture

fa

favorite part ko yung

"i should have made a move when you said i could
but i was so afraid you won't feel the same" at yung

"see, you're a game changer and i don't know your game
cause i don't wanna be a player for you"

haha lahat pala ang galing. sarap basahin at imaginin.

galing!