Paumanhin po, pero ano po ba ang kulukuti? :)

Yung last word din po, "ngitim", di ko rin po alam ang meaning. Thanks!

RJ

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I always go here:

http://www.bansa.org/dictionaries/tgl/?dict_lang=tgl&type=search&data=ku...

For words in Tagalog. 

According to that site, Kulukuti means "curiosity" and "ngitim" as my own style of saying, "naging itim." I just shortened it just as anyone would shorten words in text messages.

And by the way, "itim" is associated with an image of death so, go figure. 

I hope this helped you. :)

 

PS> Now that you know what my poem really means, I hope you wouldn't think of stealing my idea ... but, I think you might have done it all ready by just a bit. I would love it if you'd take that part of your poem down. 

 

So. How do I steal something that doesn't even make sense to me? I mean, hello? "Ngitim"? Ako na ngang Pilipino di ko pa maintindihan Tagalog mo eh. Akala ko malalim na Tagalog, 'yon pala gawa-gawa mo lang.

So, no. I'm not taking it down, because in case you don't know the meaning of my haiku, I'll explain it to you.

Ika'y kandila

In English, the author's (love) love interest is the candle.

At ako'y gamu-gamung

In English, I, the author, likens myself to a moth. We all know moths like to fly close to the flame, right? But...

Iisa'ng pakpak

In English, I, the moth, am born with one wing. I would have liked to fly closer to the flame, but I can't because I can't fly.

I hoped that helped you.

Miss, pakibawasan ang ego mo. Tsaka mag-aral ka pa ng Tagalog.

Tanong ko lang: may nanligaw na ba sa 'yo?

Tsaka, how old are you?

Kasi kung mas bata ka sa 'kin, may sasabihin ako sa 'yo. ANG KAPAL NG APOG NG MUKHA MO!

Kung mas matanda ka naman: "I hope you finally understood my poem and not make the same mistake in the future to anyone again."

Ang hirap magpaka-gentleman sa 'yo. It's like you're begging to be insulted about your character, which you obviously don't care about.

Hay buhay.

Flattered naman ako na 'yong haiku mo na masmukhang Hapon kaysa Tagalog ay gusto mong ihalintulad sa haiku ko na Tagalog na Tagalog at Pilinong-pilipino.

RJ

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My apologies. I am ashamed that my ego has yet engulfed my humility. 

I'm sorry but I find it so hard to believe your apology, especially because of that blog entry of yours. To be honest, that thing is so offensive, something I would never in my whole life think of writing. It's so easy to say sorry, especially in the internet, but to really mean it is a totally different story. Thanks po.

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Fair enough! :)

 

 well said RJ, very well said...

 

 

 

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hello rj,

ganda ng haiku mo!

 

 

"kaakit -akit talaga ang ilaw ng kandila,

minsan nakakalimot din ang mga gamu-gamong lumalapit sa kanya..

at sa kanilang paglipad hanggang sa tuktok. sa pagkalimot, lagapak silang natutupok." 

 

gawa ka pa ulit ng haiku in tagalog....  

 

 

 

"hinahangin ang talulot na malaya, mula sa bulaklak na sinta hanggang sa matabang lupa.. siya ay ligaya, musa ng pagkadakila.."

 

 

 

 

 

 

Human nature is as fickle as religion. Their actions tells the truth of what's in their hearts and minds.   

Salamat po at nagustuhan niyo ang gawa ko. At 'pag na-inspire po ako, dadagdagan ko po ulit ang koleksyon na ito!

RJ :)

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oo sige lang 

     iyong ganti ko sa'yong tula ay repleksiyon sa kwento ng nanay ni rizal.

lesson: wag daw maakit masyado sa ilaw--- wag lumipad ng kay taas at baka masunog, matupok na kay saklap. lalong mas tama, makinig sa ina.

naalala ko lang ang mga elementary days naming kinahihiligan ang kwento ng gamu-gamo.

kaya natuwa ako sa haiku mo.

 

 

"hinahangin ang talulot na malaya, mula sa bulaklak na sinta hanggang sa matabang lupa.. siya ay ligaya, musa ng pagkadakila.."

Hehehe... kabaligtaran naman po 'yung ibig sabihin ng tula ko. Para po kasi sa 'kin, life story na yata ng mga gamu-gamo ang mapadapo sa kandila. Ginawa ko po, iniba ko naman. Dahil hindi rin lang ako makalapit sa "love interest" ko dahil kulang ako ng isang pakpak para "lumipad", isinulat ko po ang haiku na ito. Kumbaga, gusto kong matupok ng apoy niya, pero hindi puwede kasi hindi ako makalipad.

Maraming salamat po sa inyo!

RJ :)

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aus ang ibig mong sabihin kaya pala isang pakpak lang hehehe.

lakas loob lang pre! 

"hinahangin ang talulot na malaya, mula sa bulaklak na sinta hanggang sa matabang lupa.. siya ay ligaya, musa ng pagkadakila.."

Pagdating siguro ng panahon. (Aiza Seguerra, pahiram lang ha.) Hehe.

RJ :)

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Salamat po! Ako man natuto lang din sa mga marurunong, 'yun nga lang sa mga English writing sites. Mayroon dun isang article kung pano sumulat ng haiku na nagturo talaga sa 'kin. Hihingi ako ng permisyon para isa-Tagalog 'yon. Salamat po ulit!

RJ

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 i've been using this two sites to check my works against the internet if they have duplicate contents already published. to those doubting thomas out there who might save their face in humiliation, who more often than not acts before thinking.

para di naman kayo mapahiya na magbintang agad sa isang manunulat na gumaya sa inyong mga gawa subukan ninyong ilagay muna dito sa site na ito ang gawa ninyo (copy/paste) at i check kung may duplicate nga bago kayo gumawa ng pag aakusa. pinagtitiwalaan ng marami ang site na ito kasi Google at Yahoo mismo ang nasa likod nito.

narito: Quote Finder -- http://blogoscoped.com/quotefinder/

            Plagiarism checker - http://www.articlechecker.com/

bago ako mag submit ng mga paid works ko sa mga nagpapagawa sa akin ng article dito ko muna inilalagay upang masubukan kung may kapareho nga siya sa internet kapag nag zero ang result--matatawag na original nga ang gawa. ngunit ang tolerance niya ay malaki din kung below 20% nasa level pa rin ng katanggap-tanggap.

sana makatulong sa mga taong madalas mag akusa sa kapwa manunulat

sinubukan kong ilagay dito ang gawa ni RJ ang resulta? -- zero

salamat 

 

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 Nice try though.Why it doesn't help is:

1. It's specifically for ARTICLES not poems or Haikus.

2. It's in English and not Tagalog.

3. RJ did not quote anything from online articles but wrote a haiku so similar to mine that I naturally misunderstood it as him copying me. I asked my friend about this matter and she said, "He's an admirer." If he were, then I lost one such admirer. :( 

 

 i'm not saying it's applicabloe exclusively to you and RJ's case. im saying it maybe useful to some other matters pertaining to checking your works against possible duplication online. you and RJ's case is beyond SEO's clout--it's a clear misunderstanding between the two of you.

i'm just posting that URL to help anybody who might need it not necessarily your case or RJ's case. It's for general purpose not YOU alone. 

Tagalog words are being indexed too by Google and Yahoo for that matter not only english.

if that won't help you that's ok it was not meant for you either. 

 

check out Black Orchid Part 2 on: www.blah-blahblogs.com

 

 I was specifically replying to this sentence:

 

that's all. :)

 "... my people are destroyed from lack of knowledge"- Hosea 4:6

Haaaaaaaaaaaaay. Ano ba?

First, the first time I read your haiku was when you posted it as a comment to my haiku. Your haiku did not inspire anything in me because I've never read it before. And now that I know you've written it, well, I've said it before, "Do take Tagalog lessons." I did not understand your haiku at all, because you used "kulukuti", a Tagalog word not really used commonly, and "ngitim", a word that you made up.

Second, I think you need an attitude adjustment to gain one admirer.

This is getting old, Pmel. You apologized, and I said I find it hard to believe your apology. I chose not to make an issue anymore about that blog entry of yours staying online, but the way I read your later comments here, well, I couldn't help but put a little malice on them. But I guess that's my problem, right? Yeah, human nature is truly fickle.

I wish if you'd comment here please say something about how I can improve my writing, or how you analyze it BECAUSE I don't like it when I write comments like this. It's not me.

Thank you.

RJ

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 I do believe I tried telling that to Noid that maybe he could somehow start adding a *lock* to redundant topics but, he said he likes to keep posts open so other people who read it could comment on them in the future. 

So, why don't you suggest that to him? Have this topic locked up so people who read it, can't comment and put this up in the recent post top ten. That way, you won't have to feel so humiliated.

 

And uh, like you said, I suck writing in Tagalog so, I don't think I can help you in that area. But, I used the word kulkuti precisely because it's not a common word. Using words that are not common usually keeps you from being accused of plagiarism. Ya gotta play with them.

And inventing words ... Shakespeare have done that millions of times and people loved it. So, I just took his cue.

And, speaking of attitude, it's not wise for a person who cussed another to be pointing fingers at them. Just saying. *shrugs*

 

 "... my people are destroyed from lack of knowledge"- Hosea 4:6

I don't have a reason to feel humiliated. Irritated is more like it, Pmel. I've never felt so irritated in my whole life. And if you haven't noticed, you're the one being redundant here. And because of you, I'm being redundant too. I'd have liked to ignore you, but like I said, you have become so irritating now. Very irritating, that I couldn't just ignore you anymore.

And didn't you even read what I said about commenting here only to help me improve my writing? Next time, okay?

That's great Mrs. Shakespeare.

I hope, Pmel, that you stop to think why people even take the time to cuss you. And if you had really read through my posts, I NEVER cussed you. Stop imagining things. I've tried to move on, but you obviously have a bone to pick even when you pretended to apologize.

And like I said in your blog entry: Sue me or shut up. You can only choose one.

RJ

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 I was hurt when you said, "ANG KAPAL NG APOG NG MUKHA MO" and I took that as similar to cussing. Well, I don't see any reason why I should shut up cause I'm cut clean.

Oh and uh, don't reply to this message. Reply to my blog. We can talk there. :)

 

 

 

 "... my people are destroyed from lack of knowledge"- Hosea 4:6

Thank you for helping me improve my writing with your comment. Please read some more of my work because I always need help in improving them.

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 Meh... It's not worth it. It's not like I'm gonna publish them into books any time soon so. *shrugs*

On a second thought ... maybe I will. :)

 

 

" ... my people are destroyed from lack of knowledge" Hosea 4:6

 

 

Okay alam kong di ako nakakatulong dito, pero parang nababawbawan na ako. Pag may nagtanong o may nakakita kung ano ang pinagdidiskusyunan dito at malaman laman na dahil lang sa "ILAW AT GAMO GAMO", baka isipin ganito ba ang mga writers dito? huh?

Well, sa akin kahit na ideya ang pinaparatangan ninakaw dito, parang wala namang susuporta. Tutal Haiku ito at sa haiku 3 linya lang!! Eh kung nobela yan o short stories pa yan medyo pwedeng tingnan kung talagang pangongopya pero tulang may 3 linya po ito.

Kaya paki tigil na, isa lang ang tumigil okay na!

INgat

Spike

 

 

 

 

“It is better to be a good nobody than an evil somebody.” -From the Movie Igor

Pangit nga siya tignan, kaya paumanhin din.

Pero di ba't ako'y tao lang na nadadarang at natutukso rin? Maiaalis mo ba sa 'kin na.... Ay! Hehehe... kanta na pala 'yun ni ZsaZsa.

Ipinagtanggol ko lang po ang aking sarili. Nakakainis po kasi na pagkatapos humingi ng paumanhin ay kung anu-ano pa rin ang sinasabi. Pasensya na po sa inyo kung mukhang hindi maganda ang ginawa ko.

Simula po ngayon, ito na lang ang sasabihin ko kung mayroon mang magparatang sa 'kin ulit na nagnakaw ng kanilang gawa: "Talk to my lawyer." LOL! Kung hindi ko man po 'yun matupad, ipamimigay ko ang address ko para kahit sinong may gustong paluin ako, sampalin para matauhan, pwedeng-pwede! :D Basta magdala lang po ng kaunting maiinom at makakain.

RJ :)

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Naku buti naman at medyo nagpa-humble ka na!hehehe!!

Naku sa dami ng mga pinagdaanan ko sa site na ito, eh panis yan!

Pero tandaan ang hindi pagpatol sa isang bagay eh hindi nangangahulugang pagsuko at pagkatalo, minsan hayaan mo na kais tyak titigil din ang lahat ng iyon.

Once naibigay mo na yung side mo, okay na yun, ipagtanggol mo rin naman dapat ang sarili yun nga lang pag nagiging CHEAP na eh wag na lang patulan. Kasi nawawalan na ng kredibilidad. Heheheh!!

Nice RJ medyo marunong ka ng sumayaw sa tugtog ng Filipinowriters.com

Sa susunod alam mo na!

Ingat

Spike

“It is better to be a good nobody than an evil somebody.” -From the Movie Igor

Guy, please check the dates, that issue is a dead horse that has already turned to ashes.

There are always two sides to an issue, and which ever side you support, I respect that. I'm not sure I'd like your kind of support though.

I hope that the next time you comment, it's about one or two or all of the haiku I have posted here. :)

Thank you.

RJ :)

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 Jonas, you're drunk again...

 

check out Black Orchid Part 2 on: www.blah-blahblogs.com

 Man, I didn't ... Ah ha ha ha ha! It's all right Jonas. I'm cool. I was just to about to have some beer and you some what (made me) change my mind. Ha ha ha ha ha! xD

 

 

 

 "... my people are destroyed from lack of knowledge"- Hosea 4:6

*Apir back!*

Hi insiang! Salamat at nagustuhan mo 'yang LUMA. Salamat din sa comment.

:)

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