i cannot write
I cannot write
I cannot write
A verse today
I cannot paint
A rainbow now
I cannot weave
A song, a dream
I cannot think
Aloud
I cannot dance
My feet are weak
I cannot flash
A smile
My mind is filled
With other things
I need not justify
I want to write a
Verse or two but
I am dummified
Today he came
And looked at me
His puppy eyes
They cried
Now I couldn’t say
A word ‘bout love
I am ill qualified
My mind is filled
With other things
I need not justify
You love, you learn...
Yup, you're right
Thanks for your time. Sometimes I just feel things deeply, I guess. Heehee.
Ruthie
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magandang gawing kanta ito Ruth, parang yung folk song ni John Denver na I wanna live, may paulit-ulit na phrase kasi na maganda sa pagbuo ng kanta
di ko alam yung song...
Pero hanapin ko para magkaroon ako ng ideya. salamat sa pagbasa kuya rom. :)
Ruthie
Hi. You can't write, yet
Hi.
You can't write, yet you manage to compose a poem.
Consuelo de bobo? The well-done poem?
thanks for the comment, and your time...
hi, alexander dagrit. i was trying to say I was not ill qualified to write a poem about love. :) thanks for reading. you didn't pitch in a comment to fight, right? i'm too weak to fight, either with swords or with words.
ciao. nice to meet you.
Ruthie
Hi, Ruthie. Of course, I
Hi, Ruthie.
Of course, I don't like any form of fight.
I love your poem.
It's consuelo de bobo, which I think in Tagalog means pampalubag-loob. I'm not just sure.
But a well-done consuelo de bobo.
that was just playing
that was just playing with rhetorics, i guess, noting that you are alexander the great, a conqueror.
i think you might have wanted to say: "if it's any consolation..." - despite the fact that i couldn't write but ended up writing one, heheh.
thanks again.
Ruthie
Oo nga pala, Alexander
Oo nga pala, Alexander the Great.
More poems like this, please.
I like poems with short lines.
Cge.
Thanks.
thanks. bye. :)
Ruthie
there is a hidden message
there is a hidden message in the poem and it says...
READ BETWEEN THE LINES
...if you know what i mean
i guess so. please save
i guess so. please save the author from the murky water she has found herself in, and perhaps, the murky water she made herself. hehehe.
but then again, i need not justify....:)
Ruthie
maganda!
pwedeng gawing kanta...
iba talaga kapag gawa mo.....
the best
jons
Magandang araw, Jons...
Jons, salamat sa pagbasa.
Maging ako man ay naniniwala sa kakayahan mo.
Mabuhay ka!
Ruthie
very nice poem...
good job girl...
keep it up!!
god bless...:p
reEse
Nice meeting you, reese.
thanks for reading and for your time.
God bless you too.
Ruthie
ang cute!
ang ganda naman, very light pero malungkot din. salamt din pala sa comment! :)
hello rael!
nice meeting you. thanks sa inukol mong panahon upang basahin ito.
ciao!
Ruthie
sana may 'like' button din sa FW
kasi gusto (gustong-gusto) ko yung tula mo, pero wala na 'kong ibang masabi. :)
"... dito lang ako
hanggang sa pagdaan mo."
Wow, Ate Ruth, ngayon ko
Wow, Ate Ruth, ngayon ko lang nabasa 'to! Pero I need not justify :D
I likes!









hi ruth!
don't be sorry, what's important is that you learn from the experience.
nice poem!
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