In Silence
In Silence
Silently, I
Whispered your name
One night, when I was
Feeling disdained
One night, when I was
Feeling alone
The thought of you
Makes me
Feel I was
At home
Silently, I
Whispered your name
One night, when it
Started to rain
One night, when it
Started to get cold
The thought of you
Makes me
Feel I was
Made of gold
You mold me
In your little hands
You hold me
As we started to dance…
Silently, I
Whispered your name
One night, when I was
Waiting for the train
One night, when I was
On my way home
The thought of you
Makes me
Feel I was
Safe from the storm
24, 25 July 2005
Patrick Orquia
andami kong cheesy poems dati, omaygahd! :D
well, i think it's kinda good naman. RIGHT?
Ü
Bagong obra mula kay Patrickman: Isang Maikling Kwento, Volume 2
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salamat po! :D
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hehe, salamat! parang ang
Submitted by Patrickman on February 1, 2010 - 11:06pm.
hehe, salamat! parang ang hirap yata nung nagtatapat habang tinitignan sa mata, shy ako e, wehehehe...
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ang ganda. sana may
Submitted by d-younker on February 1, 2010 - 10:46am.
ang ganda.
sana may magdedicate sa 'kin ng cheesy poem someday.
ambitious?
haha.
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sige, makagawa uli ako ng
Submitted by Patrickman on February 1, 2010 - 11:07pm.
sige, makagawa uli ako ng cheesy poem tapos dedicated sayo. gusto mo ba may bacon bits pa? hehe. :D
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sige ! touch aman
Submitted by d-younker on February 2, 2010 - 5:59pm.
sige !
touch aman ako.
hehe.
tama, "magspoken chuchuever tayo kina luca !"
hehe.
kahit hindi ko sya maramdaman this past few days, payag yun ! =D
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Aw!
Submitted by Adlesirc on February 2, 2010 - 3:06am.
lab is in da eyr. syempre balentayms na pala. hehehe
this is good =) more cheese please. hahaha!
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ganown? hehehe...bakit hindi
Submitted by Patrickman on February 2, 2010 - 10:43am.
ganown? hehehe...bakit hindi ko yata nararamdaman? :D
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spoken words tayo!
Submitted by Rom on February 2, 2010 - 6:42am.
patrick, tara mag stage tayo ng FW poetry reading cum inuman. sponsor niyo ang lugar. kanya kanyang dala ng maiinom at food at tsaka tula syempre. pwede ring story telling session.
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sige, tara! dun na lang kina
Submitted by Patrickman on February 2, 2010 - 10:44am.
sige, tara! dun na lang kina luca uli, pero doon na sa may taas nila. para wala nang kontrabidang kapitbahay, hehe...
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waheheh
Submitted by Luca on February 4, 2010 - 1:23am.
pwede nga tayong magkaroon ng VDay/ Chinese New Year Poetry Party sa bahay namin (roofdeck this time)
pwede yung maramihan. pero may entrance fee na 100 per person, pwedeng magstart nang as early as 4PM at magtapos nang 12AM.
pwede tayong mag-grill, mag-inuman, etc.
game?! go tayo!
'sing sarap, 'di 'sing mahal...
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sige, taralets!!! I'd
Submitted by Patrickman on February 4, 2010 - 3:42am.
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poetry/story telling event ng FW
Submitted by Rom on February 4, 2010 - 7:21am.
oy mag set na kayo ng date kung kelan para naman makapag compose na ng tula o story ang mga dadalo dun. kailangan kasi may baon na piyesa ang dadalo para may babasahin at hindi tayo mag tiis sa basta kwentuhang barbero lang. gawin nating literary night with inuman this time, antagal nang nabinbin ang ganitong event e. somebody post an announcement here in FW tungkol sa event na yan o kung anumang itatawag natin dyan...
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feb 21 kaya? baka maraming
Submitted by Patrickman on February 4, 2010 - 8:07am.
feb 20/21 kaya? baka maraming may date sa feb13/14 e, onti lang pumunta, hehe. pwede rin this weekend na.
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Ang ganda
Submitted by Jepipoy on February 4, 2010 - 1:29am.
Naiingit ako ang gagaling nyong gumawa ng tula!
Napaka simple pero ang lakas ng dating ng poem. Ang cheedar cheese! Nice one patrick man :-D Kampay!
"Kung makati, try mong kamutin...There you go, sarap ng feeling, right?"
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salamat at nagustuhan mo.
Submitted by Patrickman on February 4, 2010 - 3:48am.
salamat at nagustuhan mo. nung sinulat ko to almost 5 years ago, sabi ko rin "wow, ang ganda nito, shet!" pero nung mabasa ko uli ngayon naisip ko na parang ang korni-korni at cheesy hehe. medyo reluctantpa nga ako i-post e. anyway, buti naman at medyo digs naman ng mga tao dito saFW. kampai! Ü
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patrick
gusto ko ito bro, napaka simple yet powerful. parang sinasabi lang sa iyo ng harap-harapan na walang pretensions habang tinitingnan ka sa mata.
salamat sa tula!