Intractable
Intractable
Like an old refrain
repeatedly
Like shadows tall
and reverie
You haunt me, follow me
Unceasingly.
Like a leaky roof
on a rainy day
Like a sunburned itch
on a summer day
You haunt me, follow me
unsuspectingly.
I turn around
I move about
You’re roundabout
Stuck to me
Like honey to a bee
Hung on me
Like a monkey to a tree
Will I ever be free?
It’s been a while
With your endless wiles
I got too tired of running
You ran me out of hiding
You led me to confessing
I love you... and I’m praying
Please haunt me
Follow me ‘til eternity!
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sweet!
Submitted by maureenjane on February 1, 2009 - 12:56pm.
playful words! cute ang poem although parang girlish ang dating pardon my opinion ha but I like the general feeling of the poem light and easy and sweet!
I wonder why you didn't reply to kristine anne's comment/question curious na tuloy ako po as to how you would reply? love indeed is a complicated business and I'd rather stay out of it as long as I can.
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Then why, "Jenny"
Submitted by Pmel on February 1, 2009 - 4:22pm.
are you poking your nose in other people's business? Tsk. Hello, dear. I didn't recognize you. It's either I'm mistaken again, or that it's the same person, yes? You're so horrid, I swear. I'm tired of this game, will you ever stop? Please? Can't we just write and mind our own business? Okay? Thanks. :P
Oh, and I give up. I'm probably wrong again and that I'm going mad, insane and silly. Oh god. All I want is to write and jeez, I swear I'm sick of all this.
I don't regret that I tried to help you out when you dragged me into your game. I did mean to help you out ... I meant it wholeheartedly. The price for that ... I won't even think about it. Just that, like I said earlier, I wish my dreams of you will come true.
^___^
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fREDerick
Submitted by maureenjane on February 1, 2009 - 3:41pm.
pakisabi sa babae ba yan o lalake na nagcomment sa post mo na PMEL daw name WALA AKONG PAKIALAMAN SA SINABI NYA SA AKIN AT SABIHIN NYA YUON SA SARILI NYA PLEASE! at least i still have a soul worth saving unlike HER/HIM
tell her to mind her own business din bye!
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frederick
Submitted by maureenjane on February 1, 2009 - 4:06pm.
may mga tao na takot sa multo kasi minumulto sila ng kanilang ginawa sa ibang kapwa kaya akala nila ginagawa din sa kanila ng kapwa na yuon ahahaha ay ang utak nga ng tao pag guilty at malikot ang imagination kung ano ano ang naiisip.
she accuses people of "duck tailing" her when in fact she's the one doing it to others. I may be mean and bad but I don't have any illussions about myself and I don't trample people when they're down and helpless I know how to play fair unlike some!
bye frederick btw I love your poem!
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Bye, Jenny! :)
Submitted by Pmel on February 1, 2009 - 4:19pm.
I wish someday my dreams of you will come true. ^____^
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PMEL
Submitted by maureenjane on February 1, 2009 - 5:50pm.
You're the best writer around here sa opinion ko ha but why do you say such mean things to people? I'm so tired of being hateful and mean there's no fight left in me ya know. I'll stay out of your way and do the same please so we won't regret whatever things we might say in the heat of anger.
I just want to write again and I couldn't find the words anymore they've left me that's why i decided to come back here it just might help being around you guys again but I still couldn't find the inspiration to write a single line.
Bye Pmel I hope for your sake you'll learn to control your emotions.
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Thank you, Maureenjane! :D
Submitted by Pmel on February 1, 2009 - 5:53pm.
Yeah, I do need to control my temper. Bad, Pmel! Bad!!! Tsk, tsk! Ah well, as long as I can rise from the ashes again like a brand new Phoenix, I'm sure things will go back to the good and pleasant days!
I hope you'll do great too Maureenjane! I dream that you will do well and be able to write again! :3
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nice
I like the way you played with words and i like your poem pero teka lang ha, is this the same girl who shattered your dream and tried to rip your soul the one you mentioned in your comment on love? just asking.