dahil tayo'y taong may damdamin at may tear ducts, hehe. 

wala lang, hindi lang ako agree na porke umiiyak ay mahina na.  Marami rin kasi akong nakilalalng hindi nila ipinapakitang nasasaktan sila, ayaw nilang ipakitang umiiyak sila pero deep inside, halos mamatay na sila sa lungkot.  At ito ang mga taong kadalasan ay nagpapakamatay o pinipiling takasan na lang ang lupit ng buhay at reyalidad.

ang mahalaga, sa bawat pag-iyak, pagkatapos nating punasan ang luha natin, taas-noo tayong muli sa mundong nanakit at nagpaiyak sa akin.

tapos sasabihin natin, "hindi porke napaiyak ninyo ako, panalo na kayo..."

ako iyakin ako, pero palaban din ako kung kinakailangan.

huwag mong patayin ang emosyonal na ikaw dahil iyan ang marka ng pagiging tao, kailangan lang kaya nating pangibabawan ang emosyon para magpasya kung ano ang wasto at mali.

magandang tula, ito lang naman ang napuna ko.

napadaan lang...

pwede siguro hindi mo na lang patayin iyung umiiyak na part mo kasi ang dating sa akin nung tula, galit ka dun sa iyakin na part mo at gusto mo siyang mawala.  Pwede namang tulungan mo na lang siyang tumayo at lumaban kasi bahagi din naman siya ng ikaw.

sa akin lang naman iyun, ewan ko sa iba.

anyway, keep on writing!

napadaan lang...

in the salty, warm  water by caz

i am saddened by the tears
that came out because of me.
i am saddened by my inability
to make you happy.
   
in your sadness,
i drown in your tears.
in the salty, warm water,
i embrace my fears.
       
when i woke up,
i'm surprised to be alive.
but that's when my own tears
began to arrive.
     
in my fears,
i drown in sadness.
in the salty, warm water,
i realize my madness.
        
i held you tight because
i didn't want you to go.
i had hope that our love
would continue to grow.
        
i am broken,
for i felt i had lost your love.
in the salty, warm water,
i prayed to God above.
  
and so my redemption
will not come at once.
not until i have
served my penance.

i the salty, warm water,
you held my hand.
and after all those tears,
our hearts understand.

**Luv, thank you so much for making my week end w/ a wonderful comment. i really feel overly blessed to have you in my life. and i will be forever thankful to God, not just for the gift of love you gave me, but for the gift of you. i love you so much! always remember that.

as for the writing, i find myself speechless. the imagery was amazing. it reminded me of something i wrote before, and of my shame. don't ever stop scribbling.

Hi cas. sana mabisita mo rin 'yong mga sulatin ko sa site na ito. Gayundin ang aking blog sa http://www.allanandres.blogspot.com/ para sa regular na pagpapaskel ng mga bago kong trabaho (tula -- orig, halaw, at mga salin)