Isay
Isay
Miss na kita
Isay
Sa kahihintay
Malapit nang mamatay
Ang Game Boy ko
Ubos na ang baterya
Usapan 3:30
Alas-kwatro na
Nagmadali pa naman
Magsuot ng polo
At maglagay ng pabango
Sana’y nagbate na lang ako
Ng itlog
Para sa almusal
Kaysa magtyaga
Sa makunat na machakaw
Ikaw
Ang nais na matanaw
Kahit halos langawin na ‘ko
Sa kahihintay
Isay
Nasaan ka na?
Wala na
Si Darth Vader na sya… shet.
28 May 2005
Patrick Orquia
ikalawang tula sa aking unang koleksiyon ng mga tula, Sinturong Pangkaligtasan.
ang tulang ito ay naisulat noong panahon na showing ang Star Wars Episode 3: Revenge of the Sith (taong 2005... ngayon alam niyo na kung bakit ganun ang ending, hehe!).
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nye!
Submitted by Patrickman on February 19, 2009 - 6:30am.
hindi, hanuba... yung narrator was supposed to watch sine with Isay... may date sila tapos late dumating si Isay kay yung Star Wars 3 na papanoorin nila, natapos na (e diba ending nun naging si Darth Vader na si Anakin?)...
for me, walang nag-cross over to the dark side or anything to that effect, hehe, pero pwede rin ha. that's a nice insight. pero bahala na mag-isip yung reader kung ano nangyari kug bakit late si Isay o kung dumataing pa siya or whatnot.
btw, yung machakaw e yung mga matitigas na tinapay na binebenta sa bakery. kadalasan, yung mga tinapay na ito ay mga tira the other day or something tapos, ewan ko, bine-bake uli siguro para tumigas at mebenta pa.
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Machakaw...
Submitted by ruth_mostrales on February 19, 2009 - 6:36am.
Patrickman!
hindi ko rin masyadong nagets yung story, pero now it's clear, okay naman pala yung ending.
at ngayon ko rin lang nalaman ang ibig sabihin ng machakaw.
Ruthie
Junimun norul saranghe... ^ . ^*
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yep...
Submitted by Patrickman on February 19, 2009 - 6:55am.
masyado bang vague yung ending? hmmm... siguro mas lalo ngayon since 4 years ago pa napalabas yung star wars 3... isa itong test sa mga mambabasa kung pano i-analyze yung ending, hehe...
btw, pa-check din ng una kung tula... tnx!
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c",)
Submitted by maureenjane on February 19, 2009 - 7:46pm.
i like the way you presented your disappointment sa pagkasayag ng oras mo sa paghihintay kay isay may nabuong tula tuloy... i'm a darth vader fan too and a machakaw matakaw too, croutons din tawag dun di ba? it's a recycled (rebaked) bread masarap sa coffee or soup pag malamig ang weather. Nabasa ko din mga iba mong post and I may not log in as often as I'd like but you got a fan here... just so you know!
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apir!
Submitted by Patrickman on February 19, 2009 - 8:01pm.
ayun! sa wakas may isa nang alam kung ano ang machakaw! :D
thanks for reading and liking my works! salamat! Ü
btw, na-realize ko recently na i don't like star wars that much anymore. i don't like the prequel movies. sobrang dami ng special effects. ambakya ng acting ni hayden christiensen at natalie portman. sobrang pilit yung ending ng episode 3. haha...
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ah
Submitted by afterglow on February 19, 2009 - 7:54pm.
Akala ko din si Isay naging Darth Vader. Pero yung "siya" pla na sinasabi dun eh si Anakin. hehe. Simple at open to interpretation nga. :D
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Isay is NOT Darth Vader
Submitted by Patrickman on February 19, 2009 - 8:03pm.
...pero kung trip niyo na ganun, pwede rin, hehe. pasensya na sa vague ending, hehe... :D
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oo nga
Submitted by maureenjane on February 19, 2009 - 9:11pm.
oo naman mas maganda ang luma at orig. and dagdanan ko lang ewan mcgregor ba yun? he's not bakya ha!
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siya lang ang redeeming factor sa prequel movies!
Submitted by Patrickman on February 19, 2009 - 9:25pm.
yep, hindi bakya si ewan mcgregor. he was great in Trainspotting, one of my favorite movies. wala lang, hehe... :D
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meron din akong pinost dito
Submitted by eksenadoratheexplorer (not verified) on March 31, 2009 - 4:20pm.
meron din akong pinost dito tungkol sa paghihintay. bakit ba kasi, pag mga katulad ni Isay, kahit matagal, hinhintay. hehe :)
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at bakit parang enjoy na
Submitted by Patrickman on March 31, 2009 - 5:06pm.
at bakit parang enjoy na enjoy sila na magpahintay... :D
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Si Anakin Skywalker ba at si Isay ay iisa?
Si Isay ba ay nag-'crossed over to the dark side' kaya't hindi na siya nakipagkita sa iyo?
Ano nga pala ang ibig sabihin ng Machakaw?