lovely night

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lovely night for moonlit walk

outside the stars are calling

a scented breeze, indulgent tease

come away and sway this way

a lovely night for whisperin'

come dearest hold my hand

beneath the stars and velvet moonshine

a wandering we will go.

a sound of chime rings sweet and low

my dearest comes a calling

a twinkling light in my cellphone bright

you sighed "a lovely night for a walk, you and me"

I smiled "yes dear I'll walk with thee

in dreamland wherever that may be"

 

 

 

 

kristine anne

ed_roa's picture

You seem to be an incurable

You seem to be an incurable romantic.

I like the cadence of the verse. It's reminiscent of Dickinson.

Nice and pleasant reading.

 

thank you sir

I must admit I am an incurable romantic sir hahaha

I'm glad you like my poem and for what it's worth sir you and  your poems are an inspiration to this young poet wannabe.

Good evening po.

I have to agree with Mr. Roa

I have to agree with Mr. Roa on that, and on the fact that it was a nice and easy read.   Keep writing.

Thanks po

Thank you po for taking the time to read my poem and I'm glad you like it.

lovely poem

Lovely poem Kristine. 

wow thanks

thanks ate pau it's always a pleasure seeing your name on the comment box.

Adlesirc's picture

good job kristin!

el romantiko.. =)

frederick14mm's picture

mabuti ka pa

Mabuti ka pa Kristine palaging masaya. Be careful some people are becoming irritated and grumpy because you're taking all the sunshine away from their patch, just be very careful not to get in their way Kristine.

well...

wala naman akong nakikitang ganyan ah? may naiinis man sa akin because of my 'eternal sunshine' attititude but I don't see them rubbing it in my face yet and as long as I never intentionally piss them off wala akong ginagawang masama I'm just here to write my poem and interact peacefully and amiably if they don't like me that's not my problem frederick.

jonsdmur's picture

I liked your poem...

I liked your poem... actually I can considered your one of the best... Ok lahat ng mga entry mo... keep up the good work

thanks

thanks adlesirc.

Hi

Kagabi ko pa gustong mag-comment dito nahiya lang ako kasi mejo mainit yata ang ulo mo  baka madamay ako hahaha joke lang ha. I like your style kaya lang hindi ako napapacomment sa mga blogs and poems mo wala akong maicocontribute I'm not in a state of bliss right now unlike you but let me tell you now ok I like your style and goodluck sa lovelife mo you're obviously very happy.

i miss your works

i miss your works tin.... 

"hinahangin ang talulot na malaya, mula sa bulaklak na sinta hanggang sa matabang lupa.. siya ay ligaya, musa ng pagkadakila.."

very nice, kristine! :)

Only a muse who's found her prince can craft such a beautiful piece... 

In this poem, even nature and the elements connived with the persona to make her moonlit walk one that's unlike any other. 

Aw, sweet.  :)

Ruthie