LUST

Submitted by Yiennarda on December 8, 2009 - 4:53am. English | Fiction | lust

Body:

It was one quiet afternoon .

The sun was slowly trailing down to the world’s end

The color of the afternoon sun was so perfect

Golden brown

Gold

Just like these thoughts I am having right now

Subtle and then going deep

Stretching out to the vastness and vagueness

Of this little life I am living

It boosts me up

It makes me feel alive

It’s hard to believe that just a few minutes ago,

I was certain that I was still at my comfort zone

Treading my daily complicated enough life

Routinely performing the cyclic activities of a normal human being

And then you started speaking to me

And I to you

And then my heart was squeezed

My boundaries was challenged

And it was a whirl wind jet of existence after that.

It has become a wild night

The moon glows so bright that your face is stuck right there,

I can’t take my eyes off it

I am wanting you

So badly

But I am waiting so patiently

Until the time comes

When we meet with the moon and the stars

And then you will own me

All my desires and fantasies

But until then, I will be tamed

And will pleasurably think of the things to come

Because I know you are wanting me too

And you are preparing the moon to close its eyes

So that the world will never care…

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TAE ka yanie

Submitted by spike_west on December 8, 2009 - 5:21pm.

Hehhee ang tula mo ay repleksyon ng iyong.......tenen...desperasyon!!! Joke lang! Kasi aapila ka dyan hehhe!

Very idealistic ang tingin ko sa message ng tula mo! Tulad ng mga napanood kong mga pelikula.

Pagsasama kasi yan ng ibat ibang emosyon sa tula, bittersweet ang dating sa akin! Bitter kasi mukhang may isang taong hindi mo makalimutan ang gusto mong bumalik (o dumating) at sweet kasi pakiramdam mo kung sakaling dumating o bumalik ka magiging masaya ka!

Hehhehe

Sino ba may hawak ng iyong kaligayan ang ibang tao ba o ikaw?O kay back tayo sa tula kasi nawawala na ako!

Maganda ang tula, masyado mong sinisikil ang nararamdaman mo kaya parang impit na hinaing ang tula mo! Pigil ika nga, pero sumisigaw! Kumbaga gusto mong sumigaw pero pinipigilan mong humiyaw!

Ingat lagi

Spike

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mare..

Submitted by ilyana on December 8, 2009 - 5:57pm.

at para kanino naman itong tulang ito ha>???Ano nag mi midlife crisis kana ba jan???hahahha

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Mare...

Submitted by Yiennarda on December 8, 2009 - 9:28pm.

Kailangan natin ng matinding tomahan para masagot ko ito! hahaha! Tuloy ka ba dito?

http://wattuduyanie.blogspot.com/

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Spike...

Submitted by Yiennarda on December 8, 2009 - 9:26pm.

Manghuhula ka ba? hahaha, parang andami mong nalalaman tungkol sa akin na siguradong sigurado ka hahaha!

Totoo ba yang sinabi mong "Maganda ang tula" baka napipilitan ka lang.

So anong maipapayo mo... wag kong sikilin ang nararamdaman ko?

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TAE ka Yanie

Submitted by spike_west on December 8, 2009 - 9:51pm.

Hindi personal yan, tungkol yan sa ginawa mong tula! Hindi ikaw yan not unless kung may relevance sa buhay mo!whahaha

Tae ka yanie!!!

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Waaahhhaaaa!

Submitted by Yiennarda on December 9, 2009 - 12:50am.

Okay, sabi mo eh.

Kulangot ka Spike!

http://wattuduyanie.blogspot.com/

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Submitted by Luca on December 8, 2009 - 6:01pm.

"and you are preparing the moon to close its eyes"

lupet...

'sing sarap, 'di 'sing mahal...

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hehe

Submitted by Yiennarda on December 8, 2009 - 9:34pm.

i know, right? linya mo to... hehe

http://wattuduyanie.blogspot.com/

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reflective.

Submitted by CLOSET WRITER on December 9, 2009 - 10:40am.

parang gusto ko sya basahin sa tabing dagat. habang palubog ang araw. tapos saka ako lulusong sa tubig para ihalo sa tubig dagat ang maalat kong luha.

tapos ayos na ako.

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