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“CEBU”
The heart of the Philippine archipelago,
An island of beauty and heritage.
A bustling metropolis in an idyllic setting.
Cebu has made its own name already.
The “Queen City of the South”
With a distinct Filipino hospitality
And conceiving an extra-ordinary culture.
Make a visit to Cebu truly unforgettable.
Let’s all be proud!
Our country has too much blessings.
We must thank God for that.
Aim for a progressive Philippines.
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!!>><thank u!!sorry sa pagkakamali!!<<>>
sorry sa pagkakamali? baka u
sorry sa pagkakamali? baka u mean szzooree xa fhagkhakhamalee? yan ata ang tamang spelling dyan e di ba?
susme! college na kayo tingnan nyo naman kung paano kayo magsulat at mag spell! sino ba ang propesor nyo? ang sasarap nyong pag-uuntugin!
kung di ka marunong mag spell ng tamang words mabuti pa wag na wag ka nang dadalaw dito uupakan talaga kita!
putang ina!
it's not a poem...
pls. try to read books or any references, o di kaya bili ka ng poetry books. marami yan sa bookstore kahit sa school nyo.





At the risk of quoting JER,
At the risk of quoting JER, your poem doesn't read like one. Parang statement po siya. Sa kin lang naman yun. Anyway. Napansin ko din na tatlong "poem" ang pinost mo sana yung title ng mga yun ang nilagay mo as title nila kasi parang triple post ginawa mo e. :)