A lot of words I am not familiar with. I shall look them up tomorrow morning. But I like the old fashion touch to this poem. It's gravitating and nice to read. ^^b

Added-- 2:01: I can't sleep. I hope you don't mind me translating this to English. I find it easier to analyse in this manner. :)

I was thrown into a place I do not recognized

my sweat like grains, rapidly dropping

but my heart beat is slow

Another side is turned

Avoiding the front

And what’s behind, is left and lost

At the crossing paths

I do not know where to pay attention to

To the left? To the right?

To the north or to the south

So I spared nothingness and left the questions to melt

In the afternoon

like a baleful cigarette

As of the only opinion

I crouched at the center of the road

And kneeled soon after.... (What is tigalgal?)

and cried

Until the ashes are the only thing that embraced me

and the breath(dust) of the earth

is where I stand (and syang sa ski'y nagpatahan? hard to translate.)

Unknown to what little I know...

---Ha ha ha! I knew it! This is a good poem. It does gives you a sense of paranoia. Perhaps the person is anti-social? Afraid of social gatherings where everything is unclear and claustrophobic like the little Smoke Boxes you find in some restaurants (there are such things in Japan to separate smokers from non-smokers. The smoke is petrifying watching from the outside! I'm not a smoker-- I'm allergic to cigarettes. :/)

I digress. But I like this poem very much. Artistic and I learned new words! xD

"A poem begins in delight and ends in wisdom." -Robert Frost

"The pain the poet endure for his muse is the greatest sacrifice of all. I am glad that penmanship is guiding you." - Anonymous 

ang lalim.... pero nagustuhan ko ang tula mo...

Pati na rin ang translation n Pmel

Ang galing nyo naman...!!!!