Primodial Grief
Tired pretending im fine, dreaming that she will be mine
If she will just be kind, she will let me find
The part of her that I am longing, the reason I am falling
But it makes me wonder, everytime I slumber
Why did I love her even though I dont really know her
The face is overwhelming the feeling is infiltrating
And now I am drowning and no one is helping
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(^_^)thx 4 commenting
Submitted by doppelganger214 on January 4, 2010 - 8:50am.
actually this is one of my first poems, thats why I really think this is so amateur.
spending the whole night just doing this pieces, Im really glad that you notice this little work of mine(^_^)
"Why did I love her even though I dont really know her " yeah I also experienced it on the net I just met her in friendster and suddenly fall to her, but too bad im the only one who's falling T_T and now im in the process of getting over her, yes this poem is all about her.
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^_^
Submitted by doppelganger214 on March 18, 2010 - 10:03am.
anyways...do you have an facebook acct.?
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Yep!
Submitted by manhater.xxiv on March 20, 2010 - 9:45pm.
Click the link below. And at the bottom of that page, you'll find my FB badge. Just click the photo there, and there you go. :D
http://forcedengineer.wordpress.com
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"Why did I love her even though I dont really know her "
reminds me of love on the internet.
http://forcedengineer.wordpress.com