Pula
Pula
Ang araw ay pula
Pula ang lahat ng nakikita
Totoo ba ito
O ako lang ang may diperensya?
Pantalon ko’y pula
Polo ko’y pula
Sapatos ko’y pula
Pula ang daan na tinatahak ko
Pula ang mga asong
Nagtitirahan sa kalye
Pula ang bata
Sa gitna ng kalsada
Teka, mukhang
Nasagasaan siya!
Kaya pala
Duguan ang damit niya
Pula ang pantalon niya
Pula ang polo niya
Sapatos niya’y pula
Mas naging pula dahil sa dugong
Umaagos sa aking noo
Mainit sa balat
May dugo sa buong paligid
Ngunit mga mata’y nananatiling dilat
28 May 2005
Patrick Orquia
ikatlong tula sa aking unang koleksiyon ng mga tula, Sinturong Pangkaligtasan.
naisulat ko ang tulang ito pagkaraang mapakinggan ang kantang "Pula" ng Eraserheads. sa umpisa ay hindi ko alam kung ano ang magiging ending nito, basta diretso lang sa pagsulat, brain storming, ngunit bigla ko na lang naisip na lagyan ng twist ending at medyo kinagulat ko rin. naisulat ko ito sa isang upuan sa loob ng limang minuto, walang binura at wala ring dinagdag. nagustuhan ko ang ending at sana'y kayo rin, hehe. Ü
Mga tula mula sa Sinturong Pangkaligtasan:
Bum · Isay · Pula · Sinturong Pangkaligtasan · Mani · OK Comprende · Indyanism · Pinakbetter Than Wala · Idlip · Hyperbola · Wala · Bata, Bata (Ganito Ka Ginawa) · Hello Lucy! · Luha · Gambatte Kudasai
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um... no... not really...
Submitted by Patrickman on February 19, 2009 - 8:52pm.
try out-of-body experience, astral projection, that kind of metaphysical stuff. haha, kakapanood mo lang ba ng The Machinist? :D
but i like your insight ha. though this poem doesn't really have a background story, nagsimula lang siya right there and then. but again, the ending is open to interpretation. so if you interpreted it that way, that's ok. Ü
salamat po sa pagbasa.
I'd love to turn you on...
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You know, I've been wondering WHY???
Submitted by Pmel on February 19, 2009 - 9:41pm.
I was RIGHT THERE in front of YOU at POWERBOOKS and you DIDN'T even say HI to me! I smiled and you LOOKED away! DOn't you think that was RUDE of you?
Yeah! You ARE SUPLADO! SHY MY FOOT! And for your information,
FAN ART WORKS ARE NEVER DONE FOR PROFIT! And I DIDN"T COPY YOUR WORKS!!!!! I HAVE EVERY RIGHT TO KEEP MY ILLUSTRATION POSTED!
YOU DARE TO DEMAND ME TO TAKE THEM DOWN!! OH I DID DO IT!!!
YOU KNOW, real artists would be GLAD~!!!!! GLAD I"M TELLING YOU THAT SOMEONE WOULD BE HAPPY ENOUGH TO DO ILLUSTRATIONS OF THEIR STUFF because THEY PASSIONATELY LIKED IT!!
I DID LIKE THAT STORY #5!!! I LIKE IT SO MUCH AND THAT's How you TREAT ME???
THANK YOU THANK YOU SO MUCH!
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very BAD move...
Submitted by Patrickman on February 20, 2009 - 7:25am.
what the hell... this comment doesn't say anything about the poem at all!
anyway, since you want to flame me right here on my own thread, let me clarify/remind you about things:
- I was RIGHT THERE in front of YOU at POWERBOOKS and you DIDN'T even say HI to me! I smiled and you LOOKED away! DOn't you think that was RUDE of you?
> i don't know your face, like the other FW pips there, plain and simple. do you know why i don't know your face? because you DON'T want to show your face. as if you're some hard-assed celebrity and shit. so you practically brought it upon yourself, harhar. (and i apologize to the rest of the FW there... and also to you pam if it will shut you up)
- Yeah! You ARE SUPLADO! SHY MY FOOT!
> maybe i am... but with all the shit that you're throwing at people here, you are way worse.
- FAN ART WORKS ARE NEVER DONE FOR PROFIT! And I DIDN"T COPY YOUR WORKS!!!!! I HAVE EVERY RIGHT TO KEEP MY ILLUSTRATION POSTED!
> didn't do it for profit, eh? really?! right... yeah, keep it, for crying out loud.
> YOU DARE TO DEMAND ME TO TAKE THEM DOWN!! OH I DID DO IT!!!
YOU KNOW, real artists would be GLAD~!!!!! GLAD I"M TELLING YOU THAT SOMEONE WOULD BE HAPPY ENOUGH TO DO ILLUSTRATIONS OF THEIR STUFF because THEY PASSIONATELY LIKED IT!!
> it's part of our agreement. and since i already "fired" you as my illustrator, you can no longer use those illustrations, again, as part of our agreement, even if you just post it on your deviant site. do you want me to post your emails here for everyone to see? if you don't want to take that shit down, then fine. yeah that's yours, alright. but again, we had an agreement and you told me that you would take it down (you said before that deviant is just having some techincal issues and whatnot).
- I DID LIKE THAT STORY #5!!! I LIKE IT SO MUCH AND THAT's How you TREAT ME???
> i thank you. i thank you a lot, really. but i will not tolerate your crazy antics so don't f*ck with me, ok?
if you don't have anything nice to say or anything relevant about my poem, then get out of here.
good day.
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For YOUR INFORMATION YOU RETARD
Submitted by Pmel on February 20, 2009 - 8:58am.
YOU DARE INSULT ME IN SIR ED's POST!!!! WHICH IS WHY I BROUGHT IT HERE!
YOU DON"T UNDERSTAND WHY I GOT MAD AT JONS! HE DID! YOU"RE JUST AN ASSHOLE!
YOU NEVER FIRED ME! I TRIED TO BACK DOWN! YOU ASSHOLE! I TOLD YOU I CAN"T DO IT CAUSE YOU CAN"T AFFORD ME AND YOU WERE STUBBORN!!!! FUCK YOU!
I ASKED YOU IF YOU CAN AFFORD TO PAY 23,000 PESOS! YOU SAID NO SO I SAID FORGET IT! FIRED MY FOOT!
I"M A STRUGGLING ARTIST TOO!! I NEED TO EAT TOO!!! AND IF I HAVE TO CHOSE TO DO CHARITY WORKS, I'D RATHER DRAW THE KIDS ON THE STREET THAN DRAW FOR AN ASSHOLE LIKE YOU!
YOU DON'T SCARE ME, RETARD! NOT A CENT!
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Of F-words and R-words and A-words...
Submitted by Patrickman on February 20, 2009 - 9:34am.
we had an agreement that you'd do the job for free. you delayed the illustrations for months and you were not telling me shit about it. then all of a sudden you demanded that amount of money. you don't have a word of honor and you can't fulfill a simple agreement. i told you right from the very start that i can't pay you yet but will do once i already have the money (if the book would sell) and still you said you'd do it. and then months later, you demanded money. i said no, so in essence, i fired your money-grubbing ass off my book, you lying foul-mouthed bitch.
i won't stoop down to your level, okiyama-san. i didn't insult you on ed's post. i just asked a simple question. you're just being guilty of being such a bitch.
so stop bitching here, ok? i'll pretend i didn't read your insults for the time being. but mark my words and mark it well: STOP BITCHING OR YOU WILL GET SOMETHING THAT YOU WILL REALLY BITCH ABOUT FOR THE REST OF YOUR BITCHING DAYS.
yes, i can write in all caps, too. you don't scare me, not a tiny bit. i didn't do shit for me to be scared. but you did, ha! whatever...
good day.
I'd love to turn you on...
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YOU DIDN"T STOOP DOWN JERKWAD
Submitted by Pmel on February 20, 2009 - 9:38am.
I DID! I"M FIGHTING WITH A PIG LIKE YOU!
YEAH YOU"RE A PIG! THAT'S WHAT YOU ARE! I'M NOT SURPRISED THAT OTHER GIRL TURNED YOU DOWN. CAUSE YOU'RE AN ASSHOLE!
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oink! oink!
Submitted by Patrickman on February 20, 2009 - 10:08am.
what other girl? haha... are you flaming me because i snobbed you on the poetry night? you're not the only one that i snobbed that night so stop crying now.
and brush your teeth now because it's so filled with filth. as if someone told you to eat shit this morning and you literally did it.
keep it up, pam... you will regret it, i tell you...
I'd love to turn you on...
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Ha!
Submitted by Pmel on February 20, 2009 - 10:23am.
I'm not the one who keeps logging off waiting for his enemy to logg off before he makes his pathetic attacks. Keep it up, Patrick cause I ain't got nothin' to lose.
Here's what my first impression was of you, judging from your past comments on other people who are better than you:
Proud
haughty
stubborn
high horse
a kid who must have it all his own way
My first impression was right I just thought I'd wave it away cause someone here told me you're not a bad guy at all. You know what, I'm taking back that impression. I think it suits you perfectly.
Oh and yes there was this other girl you told me about ... or was that all an attempt to keep me as your slave?
I don't care anymore YOU LOW LIFE CREEP!!!! YEAH! MY NAME IS PAMELA OKIYAMA FUCK YOU! IT'S PEOPLE LIKE YOU WHO I WOULD NEVER HAVE WANTED TO SHARE MY NAME. FUCK YOU ASSHOLE!
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ima... slaaaaaaaave... for you...
Submitted by Patrickman on February 20, 2009 - 10:34am.
you're a delusional, paranoid psycho bitch. you know, just put a comment about how my poem sucks and get on with your life.
btw, i never claimed that i'm better than anyone here. there are lots of really good writers in this site. so you can say what you want to say about me. you're entitled to your own opinion...
you haven't brushed your teeth yet...
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Paranoid???
Submitted by Pmel on February 20, 2009 - 10:39am.
I just revealed my name YOU FARTHEAD YOU 8 armed monster!!!!
YOu know what, I don't have the heat to fight with you anymore cause you're just a kid. Yeah! Hey, PEOPLE!! I'M A HALF BLOOD! My name is PAMELA OKIYAMA! And see this guy here? He's just a retard who can't have his way all the time.
Look I'm not mad at you any more. All my anger have passed me. I don't stay mad for long. Just how it is. You may continue to parade my name in shame. I don't care you know why?
Read my poem titled, "I Will" -- that's why! So, have a wonderful day, Octopussy!! :P
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win!
Submitted by Patrickman on February 20, 2009 - 10:52am.
at nawaksi na ang kasaamaan ni pmel. ngunit hanggang kailan? tunghayan...
na-discover ko na ang magic words laban sa kanya...
haha... haaay... pwnd...
I'd love to turn you on...
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shut up... shut-shut up, shut up...
Submitted by Patrickman on February 20, 2009 - 11:04am.
lest you might eat your words someday.
good day, bitch.
I'd love to turn you on...
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Never, never, never!
Submitted by Pmel on February 20, 2009 - 11:05am.
Good day Pussy!
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Pamela Okiyama: Superstar
Submitted by Patrickman on February 20, 2009 - 11:16am.
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PATRICK ORQUIA
Submitted by Pmel on February 20, 2009 - 11:43am.
The VILLAIN who takes advantage of people's KINDNESS! I hope you'd be blasted off into space! :P
At first I agreed! Until the Economic Crisis HIT US! THAT'S WHEN I CHANGED MY MIND YOU MORON!
We lost the money that I could have spent helping YOU! And THAT"S HOW YOU REPAY ME! YOU JACKASS! Low life CREEP!
You don't understand what you just did to me, Creep!
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whatevah!
Submitted by Patrickman on February 20, 2009 - 12:08pm.
villain? ME?! c'mon...
so far, these are the insults/bad biddy words that you have thrown at me:
asshole
fuck you
retard
low-life
creep
octopussy
pussy
farthead
8-armed monster
moron
jackass
whatever, bitch. shut up now, for your own good. and you have destroyed my thread already so just get out of here.
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You're welcome.
Submitted by Pmel on February 20, 2009 - 12:11pm.
That's what you are and I forgive you. But I'll never forget what you did to me, Patrick. Never.
Oh, and on my part, I'm sorry I couldn't keep my promise. Did you know I'm leaving next month? I'll be working in Japan to get back what I lost. Meanwhile, I'll be here.
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did to you, eh?
Submitted by Patrickman on February 20, 2009 - 12:39pm.
what the hell did i do to you? you're the one who did shit to me, bitch. you thrashed my thread, that's one. after you threw me all that insults on this thread in a span of a couple of hours and you didn't even know me, ikaw pa naggagalit-galitan dyan? you have gone mental, you twat.
> no, i didn't and i don't care. yeah, go back to japan, and stay there for good. grab all the money and fuck everyone that you can.
but unfortunately, you will still be here at FW manacing people so that wouldn't matter much...
enough of this shit, ok? i can only keep my coolness for too long. now, fuck off.
I'd love to turn you on...
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I only attack the stupids
Submitted by Pmel on February 20, 2009 - 12:46pm.
and you're a Mr. Stupid
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Poems by people like you
Submitted by Pmel on February 20, 2009 - 12:46pm.
Will never find a lifesavor no matter what.
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I know stupids
Submitted by Pmel on February 20, 2009 - 12:48pm.
When I see one. And you are one. You can't even admit your own faults after all I've done to try and keep you ignorant of the struggle I had to go through.
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And you have the nerve
Submitted by Pmel on February 20, 2009 - 12:49pm.
to hint that I'm a slut? I don't have any money. I'm a pauper. Do you think I would leave this country if I had any dough on me? Of course not!
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you just replied to your own post, stupid!
Submitted by Patrickman on February 20, 2009 - 12:49pm.
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No I replied to you, PUSSY
Submitted by Pmel on February 20, 2009 - 12:50pm.
PUSSY!
PUSSY!
PUSSY!
PUSSY!
PUSSY!
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PUSSY!
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Pussy!
Submitted by Pmel on February 20, 2009 - 12:51pm.
PUSSY!
PUSSY!
PUSSY!
PUSSY!
PUSSY!
PUSSY!
PUSSY!
PUSSY!
PUSSY!
PUSSY!
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PUSSY!
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PUSSY!
PUSSY!
PUSSY!
PUSSY!PUSSY!
PUSSY!PUSSY!
PUSSY!
PUSSY!
PUSSY!
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PUSSY!
PUSSY!
PUSSY!
PUSSY!
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Hey, Patrick!
Submitted by Pmel on February 20, 2009 - 12:52pm.
I can feel your anger heating up! ;P
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My name is damned so let's bring it down further shall we?
Submitted by Pmel on February 20, 2009 - 12:54pm.
Never piss a woman who can kill a man.
Actually, I've never killed a man before. You'll be my first! Ha ha ha ha ha!
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Where should I start? Hmm?
Submitted by Pmel on February 20, 2009 - 12:55pm.
Should I catastrate you first? Nya ha ha ha ha ha ha!
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There's this mini head chopper for men.
Submitted by Pmel on February 20, 2009 - 12:56pm.
I heard you can buy them in Japan. Would you like me to send you one? :3
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I do believe this is what they call
Submitted by Pmel on February 20, 2009 - 12:57pm.
Nasisiraan ng Bait!
OMG!!! I'm so nice I'm going insane! :P
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You stopped ....
Submitted by Pmel on February 20, 2009 - 12:58pm.
Aww ... the little kid calmed down ... yeah okay.
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damn, gurl!
Submitted by Patrickman on February 20, 2009 - 1:13pm.
you realize that noid will ban your ass from FW when he sees this, right? what the hell is happening to you? sheesh! get a grip, will you?
you have made a big ass out of yourself already. now shut the fuck up and chill, ok? damn!
I'd love to turn you on...
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Hmmph!
Submitted by Pmel on February 20, 2009 - 1:17pm.
I don't care. I'm leaving anyway and I'm taking all my stuff out if that's the case. I just like to play with my food. :P
It's a pity cause I hate spinach! Blegh! It talks too! Aww ... too bad. See, this is what happens to morons who dare challenge me. What? Is the little pussy afraid? Ha ha ha ha ha ha!
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ewan ko sayo, leche...
Submitted by Patrickman on February 20, 2009 - 11:08pm.
boohoo... scary! right... let's see up to what end your insane bitchiness will take you...
I'd love to turn you on...
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No censorship here...
Submitted by j luna on February 20, 2009 - 1:41pm.
This is a place for freedom of expression...
Enjoi guys.
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she is enjoying, all right...
Submitted by Patrickman on February 20, 2009 - 1:47pm.
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shhhh...
Submitted by Patrickman on February 20, 2009 - 3:20pm.
baka marinig ka, ser! ibang level ng kaaningan ang pinamalas niya...
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Para sa akin ang kulay na pula ay simisimbulo sa kasalanan, sa guilt, sa passion, sa galit.
Ngunit sa tula mo, ang pula ay nakikita kong sumisimbolo sa kasalanan at sa guilt.
Maaaring ang manunula ay nagkaroon ng isang aksidente (car accident sa madaling salita).
Sa aksidente na iyon ay nasugatan niya ang isang bata:
Pula ang mga asong
Nagtitirahan sa kalye
Pula ang bata
Sa gitna ng kalsada
Teka, mukhang
Nasagasaan siya!
Kaya pala
Duguan ang damit niya
At siya man ay nasugatan din:
Umaagos sa aking noo
Mainit sa balat
May dugo sa buong paligid
Ngunit mga mata’y nananatiling dilat
Kasalanan at guilt dahil sa pagkakadamay ng isang inosenteng bata dahil sa kanyang pagiging hindi maingat sa pagmamaneho (reckless driving).