Red Lace

ed_roa's picture
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I espied a red glint

In between the cracks

On the wooden panels

Of a locked up closet

 

How many sphinxes

Stood guard with riddles.

Halting curious eyes?

No sentinel more vigilant  

 

I caught glimpse of a

Red lace stuck

Between mahogany doors,

Some past vanity imagined

 

Standing there unmoving,

Drawn by intrigue, I was

 Like a cat sniffing on

A netted pantry window

 

I stood beside the

Grim and ominous bureau

A piece of red lace

Clutched by wooden vise

 

Perplexed and unsettled

Mind wandering

The past insinuates

Rekindling flames

From cold embers

 

The band played on

Red lace swirling

In the garish glow

Of a festive December night

 

It was not I who held

Those delicate hands

As you pirouetted and

Caused an eddy in the crowd

 

Plain red lace seen

Awkward in between doors

What images it evoked

My tired eyes hardly make out

An unwanted remembrance

 

The memory now a saturated scene

My eyes no longer entertain

Sordid images resurrected

A glimpse of other’s paradise

 

I lost you once, oh what pain

Losing you again in recall

From a red lace

Stuck between closet doors


Patrickman's picture

nice!

 nicely done! i love the use of metaphors to convey emotions. keep it up!

 

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Pmel's picture

It is nice ...

It's funny how the color red is popular now in this site. It makes me really happy. I wonder what kind of colors will bloom next? Yellow maybe?

 

 

 

 

 

Anywho, the images I get reminds me of Narnia for some reason ... and instead of picturing an old man seeing a piece of lace through the crack on the wood, I see a young boy ... young at heart he must have been in remembering his beloved.

I could be wrong, though ...

Patrickman's picture

don't be left behind!

your turn, pmel... write something red also...

 

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Pmel's picture

I already did. :P

I already did. :P

Patrickman's picture

was that when you dissed jon?

just asking...

 

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Pmel's picture

Don't bring that in here!!!!

That was OVER! Get over it! When did I ever say anything about that? Tsk, tsk, tsk!!! >P

 

 

 

 

 

Take it somewhere else, Patrick.