Sa Burger Machine by Danilo R. de la cruz, Jr.
Nag-aanyanya
ang talsik ng mantika
sa grill.
Parang juggler,
tinutusta ng crew
ang beef patty
habang nakangangag nag-aabang
ang hamburger bun.
Ulap ang limayong usok
Sa tungki ng ilong ng kustomer
Inihain ang order.
Iginawad ang unang kagat.
Sumagitsit ang gutom
sa mukha ang crew
Reaction: Isang pangyayari ang inilahad sa tulang ito, ipinakita dito ang isang paggawa ng masarap na hamburger at maski ang crew ng burger machine ay nakakaranas din ng pagtakam sa burger na kanya ring niluluto para sa customer.Kakaiba rin ang tulang ito sapagkat isang realidad ang ipihayag nito sa mga mambabasa.
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A poem can be about common everyday things...
however, what is extraordinary is how the poem captures the experience and shares is with us....
I would like to know more about what or how your favorite poems became your favorite -- by sharing perhaps more about your real-life experiences that the poem brought back to live in your reading OR how the poem changed the way to look at life or affected the values or beliefs you once held OR even by recalling your actual experience of/with the poem as you read it (as in what in or about the poem struck you so strongly that it became a favorite?)....
Try to provide this type of sharing for each poem you chose -- and make this "story" the centerpiece of the blog post instead of the poem....
Remember, your thought/sharing is what makes the post more valuable as the reason behind your sharing your favorites works of literature to us....