Space (j.luna)
She thinks she missed the train to Mars, she's out back counting stars.
-Hum, Stars
The reason why
I asked for space,
was because
I wanted to touch the stars.
Sooner or later,
you'd be asking for
space too.
There're needs we need
to meet;
and,
the only way to
appease the
urge
to circumnavigate
the edge
of the universe,
is to partake
the voyage.
The cosmos is too wide-
You'd prefer (to be)
an astronaut.
j.luna
Alien!
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Tono
Submitted by j luna on January 19, 2011 - 1:43pm.
Ano'ng tono ang nakita mo?
G-D-Em-C ba o D-Fm-Bm-A-G?
Pwede ring
E-A, E-A, D-Bm, D-Bm.
Yu'ng isang napublish sa Graphic, Prose Poem yun na paragraphic. Literal na description sa hallucinations ko nu'ng uminom ako ng 120ml ng dextrometamorphan (Sightings).
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Sa likod ng mahabang dreadlocks at balat na puno ng tattoo at piercing, si j.luna ay isang lisensiyadong guro
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Pa-humble effect
Submitted by Alexander Dagrit on January 20, 2011 - 9:35am.
pa ito.
Basta, pumapaimbulog ka na. Todo-todo na!
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Kultong Rizalismo (sanaysay ni Jon E. Royeca)
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Hindi kaya ako
Submitted by j luna on January 20, 2011 - 9:39am.
Hindi kaya ako nagpapa-humble effect.
Marunong lang talaga akong makisama sa mga mortal. :)
Yung mga naka-akyat nga sa toreng garing, nagulat sila nung nakita nilang nakahilata ako dun sa itaas.
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Asus!
Submitted by Alexander Dagrit on January 20, 2011 - 9:48am.
Ewan ko sa 'yo.
Matagal ko na ring pangarap na ma-publish sa Graphic. Kaso lang, hindi yata good for publication ang mga English poems ko.
Iyang toreng garing na 'yan, durugin mo na nga, para di na mabanggit-banggit pa rito.
Matagal ka naman nang nakihilata roon sa itaas e. Di mo lang sineseryoso minsan (at iyan ang kinaaasaran ko sa iyo).
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Ay, wag! Wala na'ng
Submitted by j luna on January 20, 2011 - 9:57am.
Ay, wag! Wala na'ng tatambayan si Rio Alma pag-giniba yun.
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hay. relate ng konti.
Submitted by galatea hopkirk on January 19, 2011 - 3:40pm.
hay. relate ng konti. husay!
-Galatea
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So, saang planeta ka na
Submitted by j luna on January 19, 2011 - 4:19pm.
So, saang planeta ka na nakarating?
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Sa likod ng mahabang dreadlocks at balat na puno ng tattoo at piercing, si j.luna ay isang lisensiyadong guro
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Jupiter yata ito kuya. may
Submitted by galatea hopkirk on January 20, 2011 - 4:57pm.
Jupiter yata ito kuya. may rings pero konti lang.
bling-bling.
-Galatea
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I asked for space, to
Submitted by j luna on January 26, 2012 - 6:22pm.
I asked for space,
to touch
stars.
Soon—
you too,
will embrace
space.
Needs need
to be met—
voyages to
partake.
The cosmos, wide-
even
for astronauts.
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Sa likod ng mahabang dreadlocks at balat na puno ng tattoo at piercing, si j.luna ay isang lisensiyadong guro
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Melancholia crashes into Earth
Submitted by Jack A. Alvarez on January 28, 2012 - 5:39pm.
Naimadyin ko lang bigla yung Melancholia ni Lars nang mabasa ko 'to.
'The cosmos is too wide-
You'd prefer (to be)
an astronaut.'
'Bless God and bless the gays.' - Lady Gaga
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Uy!
Lalo pang gumaganda a, stanzaic e. Hindi paragraphic. Kaya, may music. May tono.
Iyong dalawang tula mo na napublished sa Graphic, grabe ang mga iyon.
The Philippine Graphic Weekly Magazine has a tradition of editorial expertise and excellence because Nick Joaquin was its literary editor from late 1980's till his death in 2004.
Thus, any poem or story getting published in its literary section means a lot, especially for the author.
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Kultong Rizalismo (sanaysay ni Jon E. Royeca)