Taal Volcano
Taal Volcanoooooo
it’s
just
a little
islet afloat
in an expanse
so serene and quiet
only a pulsating ember
creeps out of the milky mist
blazing violence now rarely seen
children on horseback on your slopes
unaware of the havoc you once caused
just
a little
islet afloat
in an expanse
so serene and quiet
only a pulsating ember
creeps out of the milky mist
blazing violence now rarely seen
children on horseback on your slopes
unaware of the havoc you once caused
cute but
Submitted by franzsorilla on October 16, 2008 - 10:44pm.
but that doesn't look like taal.... it's mayon actually...
taal is a very small volcano in the middle of a lake
owkei?
but its so cute.... nice hierarchy of words and great wordplay...
<<FrAnZsOrIlLa>>
mahirap iformat ito with
Submitted by ed_roa on October 17, 2008 - 7:12am.
mahirap iformat ito with the limited format options here. Sa ibang website hindi ko nga maipakita ang buong volcano (kalahating volcano lang ang lumabas)
Thanks for reading
Beautiful Poem
Submitted by rom26factolerin on October 17, 2008 - 7:28am.
ang ganda ng tula nyo sir ed! pati ang formatting pinaghirapan din
pano na lang kaya kung tungkol sa zigzag road ang tula? o Maria Christina Falls? ang hirap siguro
salamat sa pag post!
check out Neil Gaiman's Black Orchid on: http://www.blah-blahblogs
There's a way!
Submitted by Pmel on October 17, 2008 - 7:34am.
You can:
> write it on a piece of paper > scan it with a resolution of 300 dpi > crop it
> then upload as image on any website. :)
not SEO friendly
Submitted by rom26factolerin on October 17, 2008 - 7:45am.
yup it can be done that way but scanned images of words cannot be crawled by google's spider thus cannot be indexed by the SEO except fot the title.
check out Neil Gaiman's Black Orchid on: http://www.blah-blahblogs
another one from sir ed!
Submitted by talulot on October 17, 2008 - 12:16pm.
you inspire me to write poems sir ed!! galing galing!
the image and the words.... wala ako masabi kundi-- You're my PEN HERO!
"hinahangin ang talulot na malaya, mula sa bulaklak na sinta hanggang sa matabang lupa.. siya ay ligaya, musa ng pagkadakila.."
Wow! Ang ganda ng shape
Submitted by jonsdmur on October 17, 2008 - 12:28pm.
Wow! Ang ganda ng shape poem.. mukhang mahirap gumawa nito... napakahusay po ng tula ninyo... maraming salamat po...
Jonsdmur
hmmm...
Submitted by Adlesirc on October 17, 2008 - 1:44pm.
it looks like a hershey's chocolate kisses =)
but..
But the poem is beautiful. Simple yet captivating.
salamat sa mga comments.
Submitted by ed_roa on October 17, 2008 - 10:02pm.
salamat sa mga comments. nakakataba ng puso.
mahirap maghubog ng shape poems sa internet dahil sa limitasyon ng formatting options.
Hindi naman malalim ang tulang ito. I was just having fun with the challenge of doing something that ee cummings is very good at...poems with graphic designs.
how very pretty!
Submitted by ruth_mostrales on October 17, 2008 - 10:22pm.
very well-shaped by a wordsmith. :)
Ruthie
Whoa!
A shape poem!! Well done! :D