The Distance Between Us
The Distance Between Us
Like a river
Flowing to the sea
Soon we'll be together
You and me.
Like a rocket
Reaching the edge of space
Soon we'll be together
Touching each other's face.
Distance is
What keeping us apart
But I know in my heart
There is still time.
Like the sun
Shining from the sky above
Soon we'll be together
Sharing one true love.
07 September 2004
Patrick Orquia
Bagong obra mula kay Patrickman: Isang Maikling Kwento, Volume 2
Iba ko pang akda na baka hindi niyo pa nabababasa:
Mga Tula:
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salamat po! :D
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thanks! :D ano naman
Submitted by Patrickman on December 20, 2009 - 5:45pm.
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Hehe.
Submitted by manhater.xxiv on December 20, 2009 - 6:42pm.
Una, outdated na siya, bilang 2004 mo pa xa sinulat, hehe.
Pero ayos lang, simple at madaling intindihin.
Minsan kasi pag sobrang lalim na ng tula, mabigat na basahin.
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hindi naman naa-outdate ang
Submitted by Patrickman on December 20, 2009 - 7:16pm.
hindi naman naa-outdate ang love na tema e. kung hindi ko ba nilagyan ng petsa, malalaman mo na luma na siya? :D
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Tumpak!
Submitted by manhater.xxiv on December 20, 2009 - 8:02pm.
Kung sabagay, mali pala ang term na ginamit ko. Hindi nga naman outdated. Luma lang.
Pero tama ka, palaging napapanahon ang love. :)
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kitams. :D sobrang cheesy
Submitted by Patrickman on December 20, 2009 - 8:08pm.
kitams. :D
sobrang cheesy pero may kurot sa puso pa rin after all these years, oha. :D
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cheesy...
Submitted by Adlesirc on December 20, 2009 - 7:30pm.
halata ngang medyo matagal na 'to. kasi nung nakita kita kahapon parang di ka naman cheesy e. hahaha
=) good day. im excited to see the pics.
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hehe, honga e. parang
Submitted by Patrickman on December 20, 2009 - 8:05pm.
hehe, honga e. parang natatawa na alng ako kapag nababasa ko yung mga luma kong tula pero i think magaganda naman sila oha. okey naman yung rhymes at meaning, diba?
btw, up na yung mga pics sa fb. hindi ko pa tapos ma-uplaod lahat pero naka-post na most of them.
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haynako anne
Submitted by Luca on December 20, 2009 - 9:50pm.
cheesy kaya si patrick...
nababalot lang ng hiwaga at aluminum foil. hahahaha
ALAK pa!!!!!
'sing sarap, 'di 'sing mahal...
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hahaha... dati yun... may
Submitted by Patrickman on December 20, 2009 - 10:06pm.
hahaha... dati yun... may aluminum foil factor pa talaga ha, hehehe...
kampai!
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I'll try
to read those as soon as I can.
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