The Girl at the Beach

Girl at the Beach

There was a girl
Sitting on the sands
The waters rolling with the corals on the shore
Chin on her knees, a fetal image on the shore
Looking in the distance

Her curls of brown
Billow in the wind
Her face a frown
I couldn’t understand at all
I watch her from a distance

Then I remember, when I was young
Feeling miserable, I couldn’t calm
My mind, my soul,
I needed
The sea to love me again

Do do do do do
Do do do do do
Do do do do do

Do. Do. Do. Do.



noid's picture

Hi Pmel, Is this your

Hi Pmel,

Is this your composition? Great job. Smile

Yes sir! It is indeed!

Thank you Noid!

jonas_01's picture

simply wonderful!

is that ur voice pmel?
simply wonderful,
what can i say?
this reminds m of my former favorite professor in college
good in writing, equally good in music..
capturing things with words and musical notes...
just lovely...

Thank you Jonas!

I guess I was lucky! :D

i thought i love RASP more...

i thought I'd stick to hearing radio active sago project more, just when i heard the melodic rendition of your composition. great job! good voice! i immediately strum my old guitar to match that melody as i play it here, nice voice to match with classic guitar.
keep it up!

Rom
http://blah-blahblogsrah-rahwrites.blogspot.com/

Will do!

Thank you Rom! :D

Gosh!!!!

wow! ang lupet! ganda ng composition!

pati ng voice! parang boses ng anghel! :D