The Predatory Pothole

dollysbigbaby's picture

In the highway called life

There is a gaping pothole

Wherein unsuspecting motorists

With bumper stickers that scream "Love Fool"

Plummet to their demise.

 

And while some lucky survivors

Crawl their way out of the pit

And manage their way back into the rat race

On the seemingly endless highway,

They somehow always find themselves

Stumbling back into the pothole.

 

How ever could that be?

I thought I dodged this pothole before.

How did I find my way back in?


Rom's picture

because  potholes aren't

because  potholes aren't located in the highways of your life, it's actually rut deep within. nice poem here ang galing ng analogy. 

 

KarikaTuura

dollysbigbaby's picture

wow, maraming thank you po!

oo nga e. may pangalan yang pothole na yan e: katangahan. at wala pang naimbentong mabisang palitada para sa kanya.

very frustrating.

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Luca's picture

Malou..

Back

Malou Back. Weh.

Winner 'to. Buti yung iba kung sa lubak. Bakit sakin parang bangin?

Drama... 

 

Kung ano man yung narinig mo, hindi "I love you" yun! Assumera!

dollysbigbaby's picture

Malou Back... AHIHIHIHIHI... babaw ko talaga

mare, ibahin mo tong pothole na to. bottomless pit sya. buti na lang nakakapit ako sa edge. pero ang kakaasar, bat andito na naman akoh?!!!! 

 

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Luca's picture

ganyan talaga

pag naglalakad sa BUWAN.

 

madaming lubak dun 

 

Kung ano man yung narinig mo, hindi "I love you" yun! Assumera!