THE REDEEMER
He calls himself the Redeemer.
Evil trembles with fear in his presence.
It is rumored that the great evil one himself made hell just to hide from him.
The sound of his Harley can be heard from miles away. His leather jacket can withstand a nuclear blast. His tight fitting leather pants is rumored to have the ability to stop a howitzer round. His black steel toe boots can vanquish evil with a single strike. It is rumored that he nerves of steel and balls of iron and should he wish to, he could satisfy all the women in the world.
Yes he is theRedeemer.
After hearing that a town is in the clutches of pure evil, the Redeemer instantly leaps into action. Donning his new leather police cap (with metal studs) he slides down the fireman's pole in the middle of his living room quickly transporting him into "THE DARK CAVE UNDER THE LIVING ROOM" (T.D.C.U.T.L.R. ) from there, he heads to his Harley. He turns the key to ignition and instantly his Harley roars to life. Its ferocious growl wakes the sleeping leather-skinned bats sleeping in the cave's ceiling. He rides off to the uknown town in the clutches of evil. His long hair and beard is artistically blown back showing his eyes blazing with fury. He revs his motorcycle, letting his enemies know, the Redeemer has come to send them back to the deepest darkest corner of hell.
The Redeemer- our hero- stands only 5'6'' but he is a giant where it counts. He is gifted with the ability to kill evil with his eyes. His skin is as hard as steel yet as smooth as silk (ponds lotion) He is what filipinos call as "VALVON". His entire body is covered with thick hair. He has long wavy hair. His beard dominates his face and covers his entire neck. He has the strength of a nine-hundred and ninety-nine men.
yeah.. I think that would be
yeah.. I think that would be a great idea... I was having trouble making people see a jesus look-a-like wearing something out of the village people... we'll see...


Promising
Ha! This is promising, man. I'm really interested in seeing you expand this idea into short stories. Or maybe if we could post pictures here (hint hint Mr. Noid!) I think it would be great to turn this concept into a web comic. Whatchu think?