this is how i understand love

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this is how i understand love:

 

When the crisp and hollow wailing of our neighbor

In front of her dead son

Lost its consonants and the trail of

Vowels seems to me the last echo

In her womb.


this is how understand love:

 

When the moon continues to guide lovers

And murderers, even if Euclid’s disciples

Shamed her to becoming

A pockmarked rock floating On

Newton’s head.


this is how i understand love:

 

When I sit on an empty blue bench,

And no one sits with me, save my

Shadow and an echo of vowels ringing

In my ears.


I feel your pain, man. 

I feel your pain, man.  Beautifully written.  Quiet but solid, and I really love the last four lines.  Keep on writing.  

vinci's picture

hey, thanks!! i'll take your

hey, thanks!! i'll take your word for it.

hope to hear from you.. 

Vinci...

I agree that you are a good poet. But if I were in your shoes, I wouldn't be happy with priases I gain from an idiot like Squid/Grizwald.

squid villanueva's picture

You Daft Cunt

You daft cunt, now why would I use another moniker to praise someone?

talulot's picture

parang ang kirot naman....

parang ang kirot naman.... nararamdaman ko ang luha sa tagiliran ng aking mata.

but i like it though...

"hinahangin ang talulot na malaya, mula sa bulaklak na sinta hanggang sa matabang lupa.. siya ay ligaya, musa ng pagkadakila.."

[was here]

hey, I'm new here & I just chanced upon "...bucketful of monsoon" ...so I decided to "track" you. Too bad the latest post was 2+ months ago. Your poetry is really good. Your allusions of mythical gods, of pre-renaissance scholars--these add a certain charm. When something evokes a sigh then that's gotta be good.

Keep posting.

vinci's picture

hey

just read your comment.. thanks for reading my works dtn! :D if you want you can visit my updated blog at friendster (http://binsay34.blog.friendster.com/)...

 

all the best!

darn filter

I'm in a cafe so I'm able to visit your blog. Too bad our office has websense so I can't access it from there. But thanks. Keep the quills burning.

daimustlive's picture

how i wish i could see and

how i wish i could see and feel things just like you do. this is so deep. ^^

vinci's picture

you can XD

2 shots of espresso and most importantly - bad experiences...  XD