Three words of understanding
Submitted by mark william on August 9, 2006 - 12:07pm.
English | Poetry | faith
Three words of understanding
Courage…..
Is a willingness to take a risk?
When the outcome is uncertain
And the risk taken may involved
Harm, danger or loss to the one taking it
Believeness….
Without a faith
Is like a home
Without foundation
Love…..
Doesn’t mean at all
It just needs to return
With million love and respect
Mark william
I dont believe
Submitted by mark william on August 11, 2006 - 9:19am.
Para sa komento mo na first time mong na encountered ang salitang believeness well I dont believe you. Its my way of writing and my attitude as a writer tama ka sa pagpuna na ang tatlong salita ay walang connection sa titulo. Why? coz the title is Three words of understanding ibig sabihin nasa mambabasa ang pag-iintindi kung ano ang ibig ng mga salitang nasa poem.Okey.
RE: I don't believe
Submitted by jeNadriano on August 13, 2006 - 4:43pm.
Seriously, it is the first time I have encountered that word. I even checked it in MS Word - copied and pasted your poem in it and there was that RED LINE under "BELIEVENESS". This won't happen unless you ADD that term to the default dictionary which is in charge of the grammatical and spelling corrections.
Now, it seems that you really know what the word means - please do ENLIGHTEN ME and define the term BELIEVENESS. Is it a noun, a verb or what?
Wonderful style - effective. You have a constant reader in me.
'Til your next 'obra...
BTW, you don't say "first time mong NA ENCOUNTERED", you say "FIST TIME MONG MAENCOUNTER". The pre-fix "na" on verb makes it in it's past tense. Well, unless you really stand by your style and attitude - even on a normal discussion. If that's the case, pardon me.
Steady.
PeaceLove&RockN'Roll.
Believeness
Believeness? This is the first time I've encountered the word. Is this a state of believing - similar to that of happiness is to being happy? I really don't understand.
Also, I don't see the connection or the sense of your title. Three words of understanding? Understanding what? I see the three words you're talking about - that's about it.
I hope you don't mind me asking.
Steady.
PeaceLove&RockN'Roll