tipanan
nais nais
kong
umiyak humalakhak
sa
ilalim paghawak
ng iyong
pakpak luha
at doon
lang nalugmok kukuha ng bagong lakas
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ang sabi ng hum 1 teacher ko ang istilo ng panulaan na ganito ay
ginagamit ang porma upang maging kalasag ng tula pandagdag sa pagiging solido nito at pagkakaroon ng daynamiko at hugis..
bago ko palang natutunan, meron bang nakakaalam ng ganitong istilo?
paki-kritiko naman.. salamat.
ayos
Submitted by talulot on September 5, 2008 - 1:29pm.
"hinahangin ang talulot na malaya, mula sa bulaklak na sinta hanggang sa matabang lupa.. siya ay ligaya, musa ng pagkadakila.."
shape poetry that is...
hmm meron ngang ibinigay ang teacher ko ganito
,
bashful
ganyang poems.. sige itry ko ang site na yan, thanks pmel
No problem!
Submitted by Pmel on September 5, 2008 - 1:38pm.
You know, it's good you mentioned/asked about it cause I almost forgot that there exist a new style called, "Haptic Poetry" where visuals and audios are used in a poetic form. A lot of photographers these days are taking up the challenge. I believe you're more in line with the audio kind of haptic- isms. ^_^
i could not agree more
Submitted by talulot on September 5, 2008 - 1:52pm.
"hinahangin ang talulot na malaya, mula sa bulaklak na sinta hanggang sa matabang lupa.. siya ay ligaya, musa ng pagkadakila.."
i believe so too. I'll tell my ate pambie that kind of style after her bar. she's into photography too, she has a wonderful blogsite and like her writings too. i'll pm it to you and visit her blog. you'll enjoy there.
I'm not very sure.
I believe it's a non-traditional form of poetry, like shape poems where the poem is written into a form which depicts the subject matter. For example, when you write about ice cream, you write it in a way that it forms a shape of an ice cream... on a cone. ^^
Other kinds of poems include limericks, clerihews, higgledy piggledies, sonnets, sestina, and much more. Check out this link: http://www.writing-world.com/poetry/schimel3.shtml
Might help you. ^^
Good day Talulot!