To Judy

Luca's picture

 

 

Judy,
We’re at the point where
I wake up in the
Morn and know
Exactly where you are,
Which turns a great glowing
Sign
In my head that says
STEER CLEAR

Judy,
You must know that I love you.
No less than I loved you
When I first met you.

Judy,
The days roll by and every one
Of them is squeezing more
And more of this that
I used to have enough
of for you.
But I can only make so much
Love in one day.

Judy,
When did your warmth
Turn to heat?
Or when did I start
Craving the cold?
We’re getting old

Judy,
We/Us/This
Is getting old.

Judy,
Why do you never do
What they do on TV?
Emancipate.
Liberate yourself.

Judy,
Is it not enough to say
That we were happy?
We were happy.
We’re not happy,
It’s enough to say.

Judy,
Your words are all over breakfast
Are all over the kitchen table
Are all over the floor
Like the dust
That’s blowing into
That open door.

Judy,
It’s stirring the threads
Of steam on the coffee.
Wake up Judy!

“Breakfast was lovely, Judy.”
Now give me a kiss goodbye
And ask me what I want for supper.

 

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dollysbigbaby's picture

hoy mare

inspired ba ng palabas to o tunay na buhay?

hihi type ko lang mag comment kasi this is worth reacting to e. tsaka miss ko na mga gawa mo. Laughing

 

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Luca's picture

awww... JANE

naiiyak ako ng konti. hahahaha

 

actually, tungkol to sa trabaho.

 

Ineexplore ko yung idea na when you're in a relationship, everyday you demand a steady growth of love.

Sa kuwentong 'to, hindi nababawasan yung pagmamahal nung persona, kaso lang habang tumatagal, hindi na sapat yung pagmamahal na naibibigay niya. Pero dahil "committed" nga siya, hindi niya magawang iwanan ang relasyon... kahit na hindi niya na kayang tumbasan ang love na hinihingi nito.

Umaarte ako ng mga ganong insight. 

 

Kung ano man yung narinig mo, hindi "I love you" yun! Assumera!

dollysbigbaby's picture

naku mareng judy, umayos ayos ka

baka layasan ka ng boylet mong yummy... tsk tsk tsk.

di ba sabi daw, lahat relationships go through a lull period. baka dizisit for you and mareng judy.

eniwey, galing ng personification. haneps!

 

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Luca's picture

hahaha

fly na nga ako e. 

 

Kung ano man yung narinig mo, hindi "I love you" yun! Assumera!

leigh13diwata's picture

sana

ganito na lang ang mga posts dito.. para naman maka-comment ako kahit papaano..

nice one luckzkie! sana marami pang ganito...

... bata-batuta... malaki ang batuta...

Jack Alvarez's picture

sino?

da who yung gurl na nasa pic?

Luca's picture

wiz ko knowing

random modelya lang yan. pero kamukha niya si Drew Barrymore at si Selma Blair combined.

 

Kung ano man yung narinig mo, hindi "I love you" yun! Assumera!

Jack Alvarez's picture

yun din naisip ko

drew barrymore.

kaya search ko agad sa google. pinagtapat ko. hahahaha!

Rom's picture

Judy Garland

si Judy Garland yan yung little girl sa classic wizard of oz kapanahunan ko yan nung nasa hollywood pa ako at rumarampa :) 

 

KarikaTuura

Luca's picture

yuh

si Judy Garland ang inspiration ng foto, pero hindi si Judy Garland yung nasa pic sa tula ko, kundi si Judy Ann... wahehe 

 

Kung ano man yung narinig mo, hindi "I love you" yun! Assumera!

Luca's picture

leigh

maraming salamat.

 

hehehe... ayoko lang magpa-api ng konti sa mga chakaposters. hahaha