Water Closet

Luca's picture

Your skin is cold where I run
Your fingertips white
Your red, red cheeks.
It is not for the weather
But the storm in your mind.
Was it something your eyes had seen
That I washed away
-but not completely-
Left from where you found relief?
Sweet release, you imagine.
As you were reined in by the guilt.
At that precise moment, un-undone,
I held his eyes which were pointed to you
Some shame, some residual ecstasy.
An exhibit
Which caused your teeth to contemplate upon your lip.
Your tongue sought
To taste the sin
From a distance- the difference between observation
And culpability.
You drown your thoughts in me
Lathering the perversion,
Regret cascading into the drain.

I still
And your reflection
Is more unclean than before
I washed you


Nice

I just love it. :)

Jack A. Alvarez's picture

luvit!

Bakit di 'to pwedeng itapat sa mga piyesa ni j.luna? Pwedeng-pwede!

luvit!

 

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Luca's picture

salamat sa pagbasa

sinulat ko ang akdang to pagkatapos kong makasaksi ng dalawang mamang nagjajakol sa banyo: nahuli ko sila nang aktong nilalabasan yung isa.

POV ng tubig sa lababo habang naghuhugas ako ng kamay:

SANA NAGUSTUHAN NIYO. 

Kung ano man yung narinig mo, hindi "I love you" yun! Assumera!